Ahh, it's going to be at least close to 2 years since I've last read this story XD Anyway, I've decided to reread it since this has been one of my favorites. As I said in the last review I left, the plot of the story is indeed interesting (despite the few grammatical errors here and there) and the idea of Conan/Shinichi suffering from Multiple Personality Disorder is also a great take. I feel bad though for Haibara; the dilemma she has to face now conceding Conan and you can see her silently changing. (Considering from the story, I hope Conan isn't just using her for his own needs and playing with her feelings ToT). Anyway that's all I have to say, I'm a bit sad this story was left unfinished and especially at a cliffhanger! Hopefully tho, if you see this or ever decide to come back after these 6 years and continue the story, that'll be awesome.

I love the ball scene, you decribed it perfectly!

I love this story! The plot is so interesting and good. Conan acting suspicious. And the CoAi scenes make it better! It seems like Haibara is changing too ever since she started hanging out with him more. She keeps forgetting sometimes! Please update when you can!

This story is unique. Im really speechless on what is going in this story. Many emotions, many changes, over all i didnt expect that Conan will be like that. And Haibara being Haibara is cool as always.

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Wow, Conan trying to murder Kogoro? I love it. XD

I wonder what Conan will gain by murdering Kogoro.

I can't wait for the next chapter.

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Yeay! I love this story so much and I hope you will update soon! XD

Wow, I was suspicious when Conan was reading this book about cars, and which chapter had catch his interest, but I was still surprised to see our little detective crossing the moral event horizon...

I wonder if Kogoro would survive, I'm curious about Conan's motives, and I'm impatient to see if Ai would get the truth and how she would react...

Oh, and as strange it could seems, i've loved the beginning of the chapter and the warm light it put under the relationship between Ran and her father, eh, I couldn't help but love the old geezer...

Good luck for the next chapters.

getting more interesting :3

ne, kogoro calls ran 'ran' not 'ran-chan' XDD

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I really can't wait for the next chapter XDD

Interesting.

Update soon.

Hmm, our little Holmes suffering from dissociative identity disorder and being torn apart between his past personnality as Shinichi and his new one as Conan?

The basic idea is pretty interessing and I love you've handled it until now, I'm specially interessed by the dilemma you've put around this poor Ai... Would she choe to save Shinichi...or to keep Conan?

Ah, you've captured me with your evil plot, I hope it wouldn't end unfinished!

I was a bit sceptical with the style(it was too...simple?), but at the end, I've found it suited to the story, it tells a lot about your skills that you could create such an atmosphere without much elaboration...

Oh and I was also sceptical about several formal elements(I don't like much to read japanese words when there are valid english equivalents...)but well, the ground was so interessing that it didn't bothered me so much...

Thanks you for this story, good luck with the next chapters and sorry for my aproximative english...

This is so mysterious. Especially the last scene with Kogoro.

Nice chapter.

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Nice chapter. Hope Conan and Ai won't get mad by cookie crumbs...

Also, if you have time, check my Detective Conan fics, as one of the 14 DC movies is about to be adapted into a fanfic...

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Hmm, this is so mysterious.

And the description was pretty good.

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