That's cute!

id love to see another story from you with these 2

Good story. It would gave been better if the punctuations were placed properly. Since this was your first story, you get free pass. Enjoyable.

I loved this.

great! :D love Natsu/Erza as a couple so much! I always saw Natsu and Lucy more like squabbling brother and sister who love each other in a more familial way that romantically. Just the way they interact seemed more like that to me.

Awesome story!

you are completly rigth about Natsu and Jerral...good work man

It was great! I liked your disclaimers a lot and I know you might have written a lot more and improved by now but let me point a few things:
Capital letters
Correct quotations (skip lines, etc.)
But other then that it was awesome!

Very good could have made the ending when they confess a bit longer

Nice chapter, and like you would have guess i was laughing all the way... Especially at the "Being a Man 101" part XD

Good luck with the rest of your stories XD

nice chapter i wonder what's gonna happen next XD

Good story!

Many mistakes but still readable, and that's what counts.

That you're able to express what's in your head for everyone to read or see, you'll improve in due time, as it happens to everyone.

Keep up the good work and taking advices from those that give it to you, it something that not all get when they're reviewed.

Saludos.

I liked it!

And with your last note, here's what i have to say:

Honestly, as a child, Erza fell in love with a young, compassionate and full of justice kind of Jellal. Which I don't think Natsu really is - even though he has a good sense of whats good and bad. Also, the sort of kindness he showed towards others was different than Natsu - like Natsu's form of kindness might be punching Erza at the Tower of Heaven! Haha.

Just what I speculated though.

Anyways, really good stuff! :D

I feel so honored by the last note! Thanks! I loved your story too. Short and romantic. X)

By the way, I will try to get I Love My Rival out tomorrow. I have exams to study for, that is why I wasn't able to update faster like what I said.

On a side note, try to start your sentences with a capital letter.X)Good luck. I look forward to more of your NatsuxErza stories.

Happy ending..Ah..I love this...

*falls off chair and goes through floor and all the stories in hours; eventually going through the earth and falling into the depths of Hell.*

NoOOOOOoooOo! Damn cliffy! Great, just FANTASTIC! I really like it. Need more NaZa writers out there eh? Welcome to the CLUB! Even though that sounds funny coming from me since I write gerza and naza! Oh well, awesome fic so far - continuar por favor! (probably got that wrong, spanish is a secondary language for me -_-)