Really good story

sorry ill review again but its not letting me login anyway BEST HUMOR STOY EVER ALL THE HOT GUYS R IN IT TO XD

I didn't think you would actually write this. Oh man, this is hysterical, everything, just every sentence had me cracking up.

I love at the end you made it serious, than just completely killed it [positively]

'staring back at him, nearly picking the boys nose for him.'

Awesome, genius, I can't wait for the sequel.

Hahahahahahaha! That was AMAZING! And totally crack! Sephiroth was my favorite one! Other than Vincent, of course. (Cause we all know Vincent trumps all!)

I can't wait for the sequel! It's gonna be great!

-wince- volume? math? e-equation? *faint*

This whole story is amazing .

Defiantly an awesome read for after school. And I'm always reading about the older characters. I never really thought of a story for the two little ones.

This one was funny, extremely. It actually had me laughing, literally, falling off my chair, bawling. I say thank you for that.

And when Zack came in. I was like "Ahhhh! Oh my god! It's Zack!' I actually thought it would be like Kadaj or something. [Yes, weird to have them in the house, but think about them trying to help with homework. Hysterical.]

And then, they don't even do the homework. Brilliant.

And I gotta say when the two were arguing about the last cupcake, I thought Zack was going to come out of no where, and be like 'Don't touch it, it's mine! Don't even think about it!" And Cloud just doing a face -palm. D

Anyway, just thank you for the awesome story. I loved it. And if you are writing a sequel, message me the link.

Your friend,

Tybs

Aw, the first date was so cute!

I hate to think what Tifa and Cloud will do when they become teenagers :P

LMFAO! X'D I was going to leave a review in the end of the last chapter, but I just can't help it!

'me barett R goeng on ah adventur to save da planet!'

I roared in laughter at this sentence- LOVED. IT!

X'D

That was so super cute! .

I'm still having a hard time getting used to the Denzel and Marlene pairing, but hey, it's fanfiction! What would fanfiction be without crazy pairings? ;)

I would love the drabbles of Denzel and Marlene, it'd be so adorable! One thing though, you might want to bump up their age. You said Denzel is in seventh grade, meaning he is eleven, meaning Marlene is only seven. I thought that was kinda young, but it's just a suggestion, this is YOUR story! :D

Can't wait to read more of your work!

Last chapter? If so. It was a beautiful fanfic. If not keep it up

Aw, I love denzel/marlene. Their so cute togeather!

I think that she should like him back!

Cute story! I very much enjoyed all these chapters. I think that Marlene and Denzel pairing is just kinda... Creepy. But, that's just me! Don't let me get in the way of what you like!I think I'm a little biased because in my fanfic, Denzel is with an OC...

Anyways, great story! I can't wait for more!

In Kunming she should accept him comrade. As Zack said they are ment for one another.

I liked that chapter, update soon.