Reviews for Original Sin
Nrrdgrrl87 chapter 29 . 8/1
My heart breaks for Carlisle
Nrrdgrrl87 chapter 11 . 7/31
This is my first time reading an AH twilight fic, and I gotta say it has me hooked!
Bookwormkat1 chapter 29 . 4/26
Difficult but worth it. not a fan of bratty Edward though
Liane DiNapoli chapter 29 . 1/10
This was one of my favorite stories. I didn't want it to end.
rachel625 chapter 29 . 1/2
This has been so great! I wasn't sure what I had expected his dark secret to be but I wasn't expecting all of this! It all made so much sense. Thanks for sharing!
ameliafornow1 chapter 29 . 2/28/2019
Just writing tto tell you I still love this fic;)
Chaiteaa chapter 5 . 1/31/2019
Wow. I love everything about this chapter
I love Bella and Jacob’s relationship. They’re hilarious and the fact that it’s strictly platonic but they’re so comfortable with each other is soooo refreshing. Finally.

I also love how you wrote Rosalie as a lesbian and how Bella and her spent the night together, it was super cute. I’m also really loving Bella’s dynamic with Carlisle.

I really love it so far!
Chaiteaa chapter 2 . 1/30/2019
“Are you you don’t need me to?”
“No, I’m good.”

HES CHEATING. I am 110% SURE if it! There are so many signs already but this is the biggest one.

I’m really loving this so far btw. I’m not used to a Bella/Carlisle pairing, but I’m excited to try something different and see where this goes!
marysix chapter 27 . 11/30/2018
What a story! I loved this mature yet reckless Bella, and oh poor Carlisle. The hand to the pulse thing really got me. Thanks for sharing.
Sam chapter 26 . 10/16/2018
I loved this story. I don’t usually read fics with this pairing but saw it recommended on perusing the shelves. Bella’s way of handling everything, her confidence and not letting fear rule her was actually very inspirational for me. I also liked how many twists and turns the story had. Thanks for sharing!
MinervaCullen chapter 29 . 8/19/2018
There aren’t enough good things to say about this entire story. Bravo!
Nicoconsd chapter 29 . 11/2/2017
I really loved this story! I loved all the sides of Carlisle you created he was so complex and he just kept me so interested in the story and what would happen next how he would handle it. Thank you for a wonderful adventure :)
harmony82 chapter 27 . 8/14/2017
This Story is awesome ... also if or maybe becouse she didnt get to the Term of an own baby ... very nice written
Guest chapter 8 . 3/25/2017
Hi I just finished reading original sin someone recommended on Facebook it was awesome story really really liked , thank you I loved Bella and Carlisle I don't see a lot of stories for different pairing so this one made my day thank you
Carlisle Uncovered Contest chapter 1 . 3/22/2017
Original Sin was chosen as the "Weekend Ficspiration" story in the Carlisle, Uncovered Contest FB group. Thanks for giving us such a wonderful CxB story!
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