MEethinks there should be more to this. :)

I think it should be added onto, the ending is left far too open. There are way too many possibilities as to what may have happened next. Very very good though :) Made me a little sad.

I enjoyed it, and wouldn't mind it being expanded or continued. :)

This is great, very powerful. Whilst you certainly could continue it, I think it works well ending where it does - in the end its up to you though!

Very well written, imo. I could feel my heart ache and ... I could imagine myself being in his shoes. Love it.

I'd like to see this continued, BUT it wouldn't make it any less amazing if it were a oneshot. (:

This is really good, I think you should add more chapters.

This is really good! It sounds like Vincent is having some second thoughts. I think this is a wonderfully well written story about how emotions sneak up on a person and I do like the oneshot version, that being said, I really would want to know how he would feel if Lucredia ever did get out of the crystal, somehow I don't think he would feel as lovey dovey as he always thought he would. Great story!

Good beginning. More can definitely come from this. Vincent felt nothing when the Shera went down? Oh wait, I forgot. He knows Cid's immortal. Thanks for posting.

Yay! Some update! Well, a Cid POV would be good like all the other reviewers said. I love how you write Cid...

But this is good on it's own. Vincent's mind rambling are always intriguing when you write them.

Oh, Vincent, why do you do this to yourself?

My mind is telling me that it's better left the way it is, but my heart is screaming for things to get better. Maybe an optional continuation? Like if people want to keep going, they can, but if they're masochistic, they can leave it the way things are.

I really want to know how Cid feels about all of this. I want to know if Vincent will ever let Lucrecia go. I want to know if two of my favorite men will have a happy ever after, of if I should stock up on chocolate and tissues. I'll put this on alerts, just in case!

Ciao, bella~

I really liked it, this gives more insight into Vincent's inner turmoil. I think you should continue it, but the next chapter from Cid's POV.

Wow. That fic was strong o0 I think you did well, leaving it off there... I dunno if I'd be able to handle you adding possibly more to it xD It was already so... not depressing, but almost saddening xD I love fics where they end up together hehe Great fic though ;33 3