I just can't find the right words, so I'll be blunt. It was the most amazing piece of art I've ever encountered. I love your take on the characters. It's just plain wonderful. It helped me enjoy my day, while being a coughing, sick mess with weird stuff blocking my nostrils and brain. Thank you so much for this masterpiece! I know it's like 6 years later, but it's still amazing! You made me find my OTP in this fandom!~

Gah! I have a feeling you would be able to write a great sexy time. Why didn't you do that! Oh but in chapter six when Kimiko friend said uke I did a banshee scream cause most people don't use a yaoi knowing character.

I'm in love with this fic

That was beautiful

I LOVED IT! It's so perfect!

This is the first Jack/Chase fic I've ever read and I'm pretty sure it's the best one evah!
Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! XD

Keiko is boss.

I don't blame Jack. It's hard to resist hot steamy sex on toast.

wow. u kno how 2 fuck up someones brain

while i truly enjoyed your story, I am a fangirl who has alway been a true chuya shipper. while in not a big fan of yaoi i give this fanfic and 8.9 out of ten

*playful/teasing voice* Whats wrong with liking peanut butter on scrambled eggs, huh? I liked this story very much and nearly died on some parts thanks for lighting up my day! XD

I totally called the fact that her friend was going to make some yaoi comment, but Kimiko's "Well DUH you dumb fuck" comment made up for any cliche.

Gotta say, I like how this plays out. I mean, it feels more like Jack's thinking, "Huh. Well, that explains a lot" instead of being shocked and launching him down a path of angst.

I'd bet that Chase would challenge Jack to just try and kill him. Dude's probably bored.

Wuya, why did you immediately jump to the conclusion of "Jack assumed I had feelings for Chase"? You don't even have a fucking BODY.

Mah! Loved it! Amazing :D