Great story. Can we hope for a sequel?

It was a very good cat and mouse with the characterizations being spot on. Thank you for sharing it, I enjoyed it!

That was an awesome story! Short and to the point. Like one of those Tales From the Crypt or Creepshow. But not as creepy. Would love to read more from you. :) Loved it!

Another very well written one! Loved this story, too!

This was an excellent story. I hope you are able to continue writing HB stories again soon. Real talent with the suspense.

niiiiiiiice, very exciting and you actually have good grammar. My Grammar Nazi bunny is soooo happy.

Excellent ending. I liked the conversation between Quinn and Frank. I also like thinking of Frank with that shiny new .45. Thanks for sharing your story.

Another satisfying chapter. Your writing is pure gold.

Oh poor Joe! You really know how to ratchet up the suspense and dread. Great work!

Yikes! What an intense chapter. I loved every word of it! Brillantly written, too.

I like your writing and your portrayal of Frank, a very hard nosed, take action kind of guy.

This was a very fast moving story and suspenseful; my only issue was with Joe's bullet wound at the beginning. What you describe via the doctor is more or less a skin or muscle wound (caught in the ribs) - Joe would still be able to walk, not be fainting, and it's not life-threatening. Pain, yeah, but considering what else he'd been through in the show's canon, he could handle it.

You might also want to watch the Mythbusters episode on being buried alive; it's very iffy that anyone could survive an hour like that. Granted, Quinn gives Joe an air tank...but a wooden coffin would collapse under the weight of the dirt. (The Mythbusters tested this with a full *metal* coffin, and it still collapsed).

Extremely suspenseful and interesting story! I was sitting at the edge of my seat eager for the next chapter! Nicely done:)

That was such a great story! I can't wait to see read what you come up with next! Great job!

Awesome story! XD