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SomeGuesttDude chapter 2 . 3/27 #FriendshipGoals |
Just Your Typical Yaoi Fangirl chapter 21 . 5/30/2019 Bruh I- Once again, I'm speechless. This is another one of those stories that are so dang good and perfect that you forgot a human wrote this. A flawed human, writing a flawless story. I wish I could use better words, but it's tough when you're rendered speechless, ya know? It's too good, too perfect. I'm so glad I decided to read this story. I love it so much. We're so blessed to have so many talented and passionate writers here in the SasoDei fandom. We're to blessed to have you write this. Omg I think I speak for the SasoDei fandom when I say we love you so goddamn much for this XD This story was filled with so much emotions, real-life issues and dilemmas. It gives such a strong impact to anyone that reads this because they're most likely going through somewhat same issues; passion or stabilized future, happiness or pleasing others; etc. You wrote them all down so perfectly, you're like a wizard. This story seriously, SERIOUSLY deserves multiple awards. It should be written into an actual book. That's how amazing this story was. Well fucking done. |
Anon chapter 21 . 3/13/2019 Many years have passed since you wrote this. I wonder how you are doing in life, dear writer. Did you go to university? The way Sasori's and Deidara's dilemmas are portrayed here is outstanding. I am studying physics now and it is so relatable. It really made me wonder about the person behind the story. I don't even know if you read these anymore, but you should know how much of an impact your work had on me and my life. Thank you. |
Crystalline Shade chapter 1 . 12/29/2017 I've read this years back. I forgot the ending though and I had to manually search for it because I forgot the title. I read this in highschool and now I'm in my 3rd year of college, and I relate to it so much since my parents wanted me to take law/med/business/engineering while I wanted to pursue art. I actually had tears streaming down my eyes, both from their relationship and their passion/future. I absolutely love this story, and I'm actually making others read it since my juniors in highschool ask me what to do with their futures (I used to be the president of the art club and my juniors want to take fine arts as well). It is indeed hard for artists to make a living, but with enough passion and connections, I think we can never give up on art so easily. |
E.C. Drunk Philosopher chapter 21 . 12/3/2017 Wow. Just wow. This story is very nice and enjoyable. It is good and show characters development. Normally I don't read Naruto AU College or something like that, but this story just..amazing |
Frog0taku chapter 21 . 7/12/2017 I simply love how you transitioned the story from Saso and Dei being frenemies to lovers. This is beautiful :') |
Your Biggest Fan chapter 21 . 5/21/2017 HOLY CRAP THAT TOOK ME AT LEAST 2 WEEKS TO READ [all chapters were out and it still took that long]! Honestly, probably one of the best fanfics i've ever read. Like seriously, you could publish that as a real book! It was so well written with so much detail. And it was a roller coaster too, happy, sad, happy, sad. But boy did I enjoy the ride. I had a slight problem with everyone being so excepting of being gay, but hey, that's just how the world is now. I guess that's all. Keep up the good work and THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS AMAZING STORY! :3 |
lo707ol chapter 21 . 4/22/2017 this story left me completely and utterly speechless. the only thing that comes to mind is that this is literally pure gold. (i couldnt not leave a review bc this fic definitely deserves so much more!) |
Neverland's Kitsune X chapter 21 . 3/29/2017 I just finished this amazing fic on one sitting and I'm honestly crying right now, that was beautiful. (Admittedly, I did cry in a few other places. Disadvantages of being an emotional reader and having a very talented writer writing out some very emotional scenes.) Now on to read your other stories! :) |
008080 chapter 21 . 1/6/2017 oh my god it's done. i finally finished it and now im crying. im so upset at myself for just finding this like ohmygod this is perfect this piece of work just screamed perfection and happiness and im so glad i found this. im so glad i didnt drop this. gdi i literally cant put it into words i feel so dumb but wow i love this so so so much. im very much in love with this fic: i love the plot, the twists, the cliffhangers, the characters and their developments, the ships—everything. everything is just so endearing and goodness, your writing-skills just made it all the more better. i definitely enjoyed reading this, it undoubtedly and easily became one of my favorites, and trust me i will reread this again in the future (sue me if i didnt) and i bet this would still evoke the same emotions and feelings from me as it did now. like jfc i feel for the characters—for each and every one of them, especially to those two artist munchkins. i really liked how you made the characters' personalities canon as much as possible, and yet still somehow managed to make them hilarious and stupid and relatable (when they shouldnt be since theyre the akatsuki ffs) and that is amazing. In addition, i love the touch of school, pressure, goals, dreams, and happiness. i like how you made sasori rational and realistic on the topic of his goals vs happiness, bc while the thought of just letting go of everything and chasing your happiness instead is tempting, it isnt easy. as an aspiring artist myself, i somehow relate to this. it's true and almost sad, but that's what made this fic relatable and extra enjoyable. kudos. my god i really wish i can write more, bc i just want to tell you how much this fic made me cry and laugh stupidly at 1 am when i should be sleeping bc classes starts at 6:45 am smh. but i just cant express it, like words arent simply enough. i want to high five you, hug you and thank you a dozen times for gracing this fandom a wonderful fan fiction, but at the same time i want to shake you so hard for making me cry and for making sasori and deidara hurt repeatedly. (and i thought this was humor) but overall this fan fic is great and majestic and beautiful and i cant have it any other way. now that i finished reading this id surely have this existential crisis bc fuck what do i do now, but then i remembered you plan a new sasodei, and seeing as this was like 4 years ago (wow) i really hope you did write it. this work had been simply amazing and i honestly cant wait to see and read more your works. you got me hooked so much i should be mad but ty ty t y sm. you just fed me a satisfying sasodei and now im happy and contented. i hope, despite this being 4 years late, you continue to write more. esp nart fics. esp sasodei hehe. and lastly, (is2g this is last) great work! :D This was a great read! I hope you keep this up! Specific characters' pep talks had been utterly inspiring im so touched. |
008080 chapter 16 . 1/6/2017 I M FUC KING CRYI NG |
008080 chapter 11 . 1/5/2017 im so hurt fuck kvkficjckdifjdjsk |
Guest chapter 21 . 7/19/2016 Damn that was amazing I haven't read a sasodei this good in a while kudos to you my friend |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/19/2016 I really,really love your 's amazing and has made me cry so many story has eventually killed me,filled me with so much emotion..It's so dramatic,made me depressed when Dei almost die and so so happy when they are finally together.I must say,I am a huge fan of Sasodei,I am quite an obsessive fan that cry very often thiking about how perfect my otp are.I also hate it so much when some of the writers make Dei into such feminine and submissive is tottaly not like that,beside he is quite manly i think..I love how in your story everyone is so in-character.I love your writting skill,especially at the part when Dei get hit by a car,my heary was just about to explode you know.I love the fighting,arguments and the tiny moments of the pillow fort,the night when they drink vodka together, Sasori's confession and the let's go home scence...They are just so sweett X .Too much for a fangirl's heart. I doubt that you will read my review,but i just want to say that I love you and your story so much,that you are an amazing writer and you should write more you for this story,for all the emotions,for bringing me sadness as well as happiness..This is 1 of the best fanfiction I have ever read |
Mintjewel chapter 15 . 5/6/2016 Um 8500 yen is less than a hundred us dollars and 85000 yen is around 790 us dollars. |