so great. I've been reading all of your one and two shots lately because you're just awesome.

This was a good start to the story. I hope you finish it some time.

This was an amazing little two shot. I loved the storyline on this. The angst was awesome

Well I was totally not expecting that to happen.

that was touching..and dam..yep rach is DEFINITELY shelby's daughter..they are both so stubborn! i love the touching scene btwn rach and shelby plus the dad...i hope u update soon

Please update this !

Awwww please update !

Loved it. And I'm so glad Rachel is alive and ok. Plus that last scene - so sweet. I just love your characterization of Shelby and her relationship with Rachel :)

Oh no! What a horrible experience to go through :(

Question tho: will whatever effect Rachel might have as result of the accident affect her in the long term of your series?

Please keep writing forever.. Reading your stories is my favorite hobby. :)

Are you going to update this story?

I hope you do :)

Update ! Please (:

Story idea... Rachel auditions for a part that she really wants and doesn't get it, so Shelby helps her through this.

This is another idea... which I know, is a STRETCH... Rachel getting pregnant.

So glad that little bitty Rachel is ok! Poor thing was so scared waking up not knowing where she was, and Shelby was just a wreck! It's so typical Rachel to feel guilty about something that was so out of her control. And of course, cranky Rachel when she was miserable at the hospital and not wanting to go to sleep at home. You know you're my favorite author, and I am so glad you continue to write these little Rachel stories! I really can't wait for more of them, and of course, CftB!

Great story, I seriously loved it! This was perfect with just the right balance of dramatic, heartwarming and humorous moments while still keeping it pretty real. At the start, I was holding my breath to see how Rachel was and while part of me wanted more serious injuries for the sake of more drama, I'm glad that Rachel's relatively okay and that Shelby won't feel so guilty.

I love how Shelby and Rachel are both so stubborn and they realize the other is while denying that they themselves are. I really liked the moments between them like when Rachel was apologizing and blaming herself and especially in the car when Rachel noticed Shelby's pain and held her hand, it was so sweet! The part where Shelby conceded into taking the pills was funny. The most touching was probably the last part where Rachel crept into Shelby's bed while she slept and kissed her then held her hand.

Good job, I love all you're stories and I have to say you are a genius! I like that you've tried out something slightly different from your usual stories and it was just as amazing! Anyway, I'm looking forward to more Changed for the Better, hope you'll be able to update it soon!