good start. it needs to be continued though. ahem.

So glad you posted this story. My favorite part was him looking in the cupboard, just staring and re-listing the foil paper, cake mix, peanut butter over and over again.

Can't wait for the next update (which hopefully will come soon) and I'm wondering what exactly he's going to say and do to Juuhachigou/Juunanagou that will get him murdered. Because I'm imagining him depressed and with a death wish, and just losing it and full out coming onto her with pickup lines.