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Firefly1995 chapter 14 . 9/7/2019 I love this fic. A Snape that isn't feeling dependent on Lily(or anyone for that matter) is rare and your atory deserve more views. Sad that it is abandoned though. |
Guest chapter 13 . 4/29/2019 that is the weirdest way to ever end a relationship ever? giving a blowjob while crying telling them you dont love them. |
Firefly1995 chapter 15 . 1/8/2019 PLEASE CONTINUE! |
Guest chapter 15 . 6/19/2017 How dare that filthy Harry? He needs a good ass kicking. |
hes5thlazarus chapter 15 . 2/3/2017 I really enjoy your fic. Do you think you're going to continue? If not, could you post an outline? I'm invested in the ending. :) Hope your novel is going well! |
hes5thlazarus chapter 15 . 11/21/2016 I'm so glad you updated again! Love this fic, love Snape's nastiness, love how clueless and also nasty Lily is, love how bumbling James is, but I'd really like to see some comeuppance for Sirius for setting up James and Lily to be raped. Because he took Lily's consent away, and in a way James as well. Harry's so horrible-are we going to see a little bit of the good we saw in canon? Some of his morality survived the Dursleys; will it survive Lily & James too? |
Short-circuit-Soulmate chapter 15 . 10/17/2016 Thank you for updating! Really enjoying this story :) |
Guest chapter 15 . 10/12/2016 This is a really interesting take. Read the whole story in one sitting and now a bit sad that there isn't more to devour! But enjoyed it all the same. Do update if you can find the time... This is one of the more unusual stories I've read in the fanfic genre. |
Shewanda chapter 15 . 10/5/2016 Lilly should have told Sev what happened to her all those years ago...the wizard equivalent of a date rape drug, waking up in a vulnerable position, immediately losing Sev's friendship, basically marrying your rapist...am I reading this right? Lots of suspension of belief, I'm afraid. Meanwhile, hermoine's story seems unrelated. It's been linked only casually so far. |
tuityfruity333 chapter 15 . 9/25/2016 I am so glad you updated. This was a great chapter. I can't wait for the next one. |
JaneDoh0 chapter 15 . 9/11/2016 I just discovered this, and it is very interesting. JKR's world without the unreasonable optimism for Gryffindors and unreasonable evil for Slytherins. I also like the non-perfect Lily, who seems much more like someone who would have been friends with Severus than usual. Severus also seems like a misanthrope who had a terrible life this far, but who also actually got some closure on the Lily situation (unlike in canon) before she ripped it all open again. His reasons for interviewing at Hogwarts actually make sense. Sirius is very creepy, but kind of cluelessly so. I hope you will keep going. |
brighteyes2889 chapter 15 . 9/7/2016 So very happy to see an update! Can't wait for next chapter :) |
actionliker chapter 15 . 9/7/2016 Oh my god its like a dream come true because you finally updated! So glad to see you have returned! |
G chapter 1 . 9/6/2016 Honestly, it's very hard to feel sympathetic to Lily in this story. She's married and a mother and there really is no excuse for her to be chasing after a guy who wants nothing to do with her. Basically, she comes off like a selfish slag. She needs to divorce her husband or realize he wasn't that bad in the first place if she married him. |
IonicAmalgam chapter 15 . 9/6/2016 Finally an update :) Real life is hard, yes. |