I really enjoyed this keep up the great work.

Hmm... Interesting... I like it!

This story has potential, but I don't really understand what's going on.

"Every Jedi had their struggles with the Force, but very few had to battle the Force itself, the way it bound you to the universe. Cloud Strife had to, and had lost his sanity many times for it." Does that mean that Cloud can't die, even though he wants to?

"They got to the important things later, but as far as Obi-Wan was considered, they got there all too late." Does that mean that Anakin still went Sith, that Obi-Wan died, or just that Anakin wasn't as respectful as Obi-Wan would like?