Loved it! You are very good at conveying emotions believably. I even teared up at parts! I really enjoyed this fic, great job!

I've really enjoyed your story... I'm not sure how I started reading it, since I'm a Bill girl all the way and tend to skip most of the Eric stuff... but I'm glad I found this one. I have always loved the relationship between Eric and Pam and I'm glad they were able to work through everything.

I also enjoyed the relationship you developed between Bill and Pam, even if it didn't always go smoothly. I do appreciate that you didn't feel the need to bash Bill just because... My favorite stories are always the ones that treat Bill and Eric fairly, and this one could definitely go on that list! Thanks!

Bonjour,J'ai lu cette fiction avec la traduction google et j'ai vraiment adoré!
very, it's a good story, you are a nice written :)

love it...beautiful story and beautifully written

I'm quite apologetic for not reviewing any other chapters, that's a big regret of mine, but please believe that I thoroughly enjoyed every bit of this story and I'd like to thank you for taking the time to share your vision with us. Something that could never be shown on the show.

You took the time to show us facets of the characters that TB had neglected to provide.

A remorseful Eric.

The humanness in Pam.

And honestly, I loved your Bill in this. You've kept that sneakiness to him that I happen to find alluring and also showed the lovingess that he still possesses.

Sure, people have expressed their disliking to Eric using the term "daughter," when referencing Pam, but I feel as if the bond between a Maker and their progeny supersedes the box that reviewer has put them into. I believe they're looking at it strictly from a father daughter relationship, but it isn't that when it comes to making someone.

Now I could see if it was oh say... Eric and Nora fucking... they're related like brother and sister in every sense of the word.

That reviewer was just passionate... just like the one who went the hell off because they didn't agree.

Anywho, that's neither the time nor the place for that discussion.

That you very much for giving me the joy of experiencing what a canon ship could become. I never read canon ship stories and I just so happened to stumble on to yours and gave it a chance.

I'm glad I took the risk.

Thank you.

It was great I really enjoyed it :)

I feel bad for bill, but Pam had to end up with Eric . There was too much history there for her not to.
Great story!

It's always kind of sad to see a story end. I hate it when people just quit writing a story though. I always want an ending.
Happy writing.

thank you so much for this...loved it...reallly looking forward to your next paric fic!

Ending made me sad. Looking forward to more Paric!

Loved this chapter! Actually kinda proud of Bill for coming clean, we all know that's not his strong suit. And Eric handled the situation regally as always.

Please, Pam, go home with your maker!

(Also, very excited about a new far more Paric fic! :D)

Awwww poor Bill... On the happy side, yay Pam and Eric are happy again!

Thanks for the chapter. I have been following this story from the very first chapter. You have a unique writing style and it makes it enjoyable to the reader. I look forward to your other stories.

yes please do write another one...missing paric nowadays...love your writing!

I like this chapter very much. I almost feel bad for bill..almost. Update soon