I LOVE THE BACKSTROY I LOVE THIS MY GOD

There are days when you come across the perfect fanfiction. And then there are days when that perfect fanfiction has an even better backstory fanfiction that makes you want to cry.

Teardles are in my eyebawldles

...I don't even...
This chapter was pretty stinkin funny all serious themes considered.

Woah! Totally legitimate nosebleed explanation! Goooo author! I have corrections ths time.
carelessly just inside the foyer, and sprinting up to his apartment
The comma before and should be eliminated.
"I'm so tired."
End it with a comma since it's in quotation marks
justtired.
Forgot a space

Woo ! I only counted three mistakes. Also it would reaaaaaaally help if you could put spaces in your French. Antonia also has a Spanish phrase that needs a space, I think. Translations might be nice too, for us non french speaking peoples.

Still reading,
Kheelwithit

Ok, no spotting errors this time, I didn't bother. Too busy enjoying plot. But if there were any, they were small enough as to not block the reading flow. The bear is, for the record kumajirou, right?
While I must cut my praises short, know that I abandon complementing you in favor of reading the next chapter. That should be perhaps the best complinent of them all.

'Till I can stop hitting the next button long enough to give you a good review,
KHEELWITHIT

Could I ask some question?"
Should be changed to questions.
Now he detoxes
Add a comma.
His he younger?
Change to Is he younger.
Well now I know why you picked me up! I would like to go home, please."
Add either comma or exclamation mark after well for interjectory puropses.

Ok. Sorry for maybe seeming like an asshat, but you made a great chapter. Those errors were the only thing wrong. I ran through this really quick and picked up the errors I saw, but for maximum amazingness, I would recommend getting a beta. That way these little stinker mistakes can be ironed out before posting.

If you can't find one easily, I, kheelwithit, gladly offer my services.
(ﾉヮ)ﾉ*:･ﾟ

Still really fucking lazy,
KHEELWITHIT

That made perfect sense author.
If people say it doesn't, they lower the IQ of your entire street and I as a concerned reader will be forced to reccomend evacuation. Stupidity is contagious through diffusion.
I absolutely love your style. It clearly shows how addled Matthieu is by heroin. I really like the memory tricks he has.

Ever encouraging, but too damn lazy to sign in,
KHEELWITHIT

That. Was. So. Cute! *squeals*

Hey...I don't expect you to correct this, but "mijo" is actually spelled "mihijo". I live in Ecuador and I've lived here since I was three so I speak fluent Spanish. I just thought I'd tell you. :3

i loved it! you have a very good writing style! hope i will be able yo do something like this one day!

i like it. but when people are talking, make sure not to forget the "..." around each word!

*sniffles* so sad/awesome and i love it!

ur not te only 1 wif a pervy mind... i do toooo

Eleven roses, eleven chapter. Strange how that worked out. Anyway, loved the story! Keep on writing!
-Moonlight's Shadow Warrior :D

Beautiful story. So sad but I loved how real it felt, especially the end. It wasn't a super sad ending but it wasn't exactly happily ever after either. I really liked that. I'm glad that Mattie's going to try and make it work with Francis though, it would've been awful if he'd decided not to give him a chance. Your writing's excellent, by the way. :) Well done!