This story is very nice

That was for sure one of the best 18 FFs I've ever read *_*
Every thought of her, her perception, these cute dialogues... I was commiserating with her wih every word I've read! Thank you so much for sharing your story

*hair strand

If there is one thing your 18 is one up upon so many other "FF 18s" - she is constantly pulling this one hair strain behind her ear I do love this habit of her Thanks for this great chapter!

This is just wonderfully written! I'm intrigued This is how I imagined 18s and Krillins kind of difficult apprximation.
Oh my - reading 18s POV is just gripping! I fell in love with your writing style and way of expressing inner monologues and feelings.

I'm totally obsessed with the android twins and your story leaves me wanting to read all the other chapters in one go

This stuff is so beautiful and really deep. Honestly wouldn’t mind the other idea chapter as a separate story one-shot. I have a feeling what it probably is and am curious

God this was so good! The way you portrayed Android 18's inner turmoil and eventually coming to accept herself and be happy alongside Krillin was so touching. I absolutely loved reading through this story, thank you for giving such a great couple the appreciation they deserved.

Beautiful, simply beautiful. This was an absolute joy to read. The concept of 18 only experiencing fleeting moments of emotion is something I haven't read before, but I really really enjoyed it and found it so easy to imagine as a part of her character.

Your writing style is wonderful, so smooth, free flowing and easy to read. I loved the way you wrote both Krillin and 18, both seemed so true to their characters, but at the same time, you brought something new to them as well.

Overall, a beautiful job, I throughly enjoyed this from start to finish!

Best wishes,
- Deadly Beauty

This was amazing and beautifully written. I couldn't have asked for anything better than this when I went on my first search for a story about Krillin and 18.

The way you were able to step back and observe emotions that way 18 would was perfect. You took parts of the story that we know to be true, and created something that is easily believed to be true. This was simple and complex all at once, and truly one of the best fics I've ever come across.

Thanks so much for the amazing experience :)

Hello, I always leave reviews when I read a fan fic that I like. However, in a very few cases, like now, that habit is very hard to fulfill. Your story was more than great, more than amazing, and more than awesome. To be honest, for me, this story is a masterpiece.

I couldn't believe when you said that Kuririn x Juuhachigou was unpopular; I can assure you that it is way the opposite. In fact, that couple is the third most love couple in Dragon ball right after Goku x Chichi and Vegeta x Bulma.

I started watching that anime in the 90s and 18 captured my full attention from the beginning and more than 20 years later I still love her. In fact, I started writing fanfiction because of her and as you can see, I haven't stopped reading fanfiction of that couple. That is another habit I'd like to keep 'til I die.

I can't tell you how many stories about them I've red, I lost count some years ago; but yours is so good, so well written, so right that I won't forget it. 90% of the fan fics regarding them have the same premise: to tell us how they fell in love, how they got married and how they had their daughter. It is almost impossible being original for the plot

But, you can indeed being unique by the way you tell the story and that is the key for being a great author. You were able to capture the true essence of Juuhachigou, you really were capable of showing us her real nature. It is not the first story I read where the author explains her lack of emotions by using the device solution. But the way you got inside her to make her share her thoughts was superb.

I really believed I was reading her words instead of yours; In fact, I really think you know her more than Toriyama sensei. Besides, it is delightful to read you, I felt like flowing with the words. It was an amazing trip.

My only complaint is that the story is way too short I'd really like if you make a sequel. There are more things to tell, Buu arc, Battle of Gods, Fukkatsu no F and of course Dragon Ball Super. It would be nice to dive into your words again to see life through her eyes.

Congratulations, you are a great author; don't ever stop writing; that would be a crime.

Regards.

That was so touching and sweet, I love the Krillin / 18 pairing. I was tearing up the whole time reading it it's so cute!

Loved this. Best DBZ fanfic out there, no joke. Keep going man!

I enjoyed this story very much!

Mmmmmm.
Oddly enough, could relate pretty well with 18.

This story is so great.
Thank you for it.

I like your characterization of 18, she was very stoic but there were always some glimpses of emotion in her eyes in the anime and I think you capture that sentiment very well on your portrayal.

I am a B/V shipper but I like to read other stories from time to time and there are not many good K/18 fics, so I am glad you wrote this one.