Snakes? He’s going to summon snakes? That sucks. What about the toads? Or Jiraya?. Your story was good but Now it’s a little irritating, Anko hasn’t even known him long, especially to be threatening him on his B rank mission, Your also kinda pushing it for the big sister role. I don’t know anything about hinata, or why she has a curse mark on her forehead, or about sasuke if he’s still thinking about Itachi, what about how they all met. I’m sorry it wasn’t for my liking, it was good at first for me but I’m just not into it anymore, it wasn’t bad, still thank you for the story. And continue writing

Still reading, pretty good, not that much naruhina moments but there still young and there on the same team so that’s still good for me. Anko is cool but for some reason I don’t like her getting involved so much with them because I don’t want her to corrupt hinata, I mean the whole big sister thing wouldn’t really cut it for me, she just popped out of no where, but if your going for that then I guess it’s fine. Still reading:)

Great job please continue

please update this story soon. It is amaizing

Is this ff really about naruhina pairing coz certainly I haven't read that part ...u certainly showing good growth rate In naruto, but what about hinata is she not going to be strong or so and the way he talk to ammo hanre is more like harem or so(no offence though). As a reader its feels like that. And if can be so concerned about those than y not hinata and quiet frankly I haven't read much about about hinata in here apart from a stalker shy weak girl!

Aaaaaand, then you stopped updating. Oh well. I usually don't bother reviewing fivs that haven't updated in more than three years, but this was so good, I made an exception. I wanna know what red-head Naruto looks like, because he sounds fucking hilarious. I don't know how you made him 10x more skilled than canon Naruto without my immeadiately dismissing him as a Gary Stue and moving the fuck on, but here I still am, bitter that this fic will never be complete. Your writing is the kind of writing that simultaneously makes me want to give up on writing forever because mine will never be as good and start writing immeadiately so I can try to catch up even a little bit. This whole thing blew me away. I would pay money to see how this fic ends, honestly. The fact that you were promising (or was it threatening, because I feel like my life hangs in the balance a bit here) a Book 2 to this, with added NaruHina, just breaks my heart a lil. No worries. Thanks for the gift of your writing anyway. I hope you still write, even if it isn't this fic, because you're just that good ;)

Yours,
Summer

This is amazing! Honest to god best naruto fanfic I've ever read. Cant wait for the next chapter :)

And why hasn't Hinata's revised back story been explained. Except for a few hints, there isn't any concrete story of her younger years.

Why did Naruto use the name "Minato" when he first met Sasuke?
Why didn't Hanare delete the things she learned from Naruto? Still keeping it is an invasion of privacy.

Two questions.
1: When did Sasuke get his Sharingan because I am sure it wasn't mentioned.
2. Anko can't teach Naruto how to summon snakes as she doesn't have the contract. Orochimaru does. So, Naruto still can't learn to summon snakes. But say he does, who will learn to summon toads? Sasuke?

I don't even know why I am asking/saying these the author probably has forgotten about this story.

This whole story is totally awesome! I really like how you managed to tweak Naruto's personality(he's a lot more sarcastic and witty than he was in the original series) but still managed to keep his personality and principles. Please write more real soon!

I'm sad that this hasn't gotten updated in the last few years, especially right before things were really starting to get active. Hope you pick this back up again eventually.

Hmm, I have to say that this Naruto's Yami/Dark Emotions self seems like it would be A LOT more dangerous than canon Naruto's...canon Naruto at the very least found an outlet of sorts in pranking, and while TWoF Naruto is far more rational/calm/intelligent/mature he's also more blatantly repressing/ignoring his negative emotions.

I have no constructive criticism to good since I'm very untalented in writing. All I can give is my apriciation for gracing the fanficition world with your humorous, and quite simple the essence of all entertaining stories that make reading worthy of unneeded pictures. Thanks and I hope you resume this story. There's nothing more unfortunate then being unable finish a story you so thoroughly admire. Entertained reader Tavairus D. Hernandez the First and only,for now.

Dude where have u been ?