Siempre me gustó esa pareja y tú historia me encanto.

Such a good fucking story that aged to perfection. 3

Fantastic

This is my favorite type of Lemons, Lemon with an acceptable plot.

That and Jiraiya's "research" scenes were incredibly hilarious that I LMAO hahahahaha

But did Hinata attend the wedding? Poor thing.

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Great story!

It's been a while (few years I think?) since I last read this, and the second chapter is much different than I remember. Lots of stuff added in, which I think finished the story quite nicely compared to before. Good fight scenes, excellent humor, decent character development when taking the time skips into consideration, overall it's a great story that I enjoyed reading yet again. Would've liked to see a little bit more of what kind of trouble Naruto & Fu's children get into, but then again that might end up being a story on its own.

On a side note: You mentioned that we're not allowed to have Minato's Super Secret Sex Jutsu, unless we reviewed the story. So is it ok if I add it into a story I'm planning? Even if it isn't required, I'd give you the proper credit in an A/N since I don't think anyone else has thought of it besides you. (Not sure when, or if, I'm ever going to get around to writing the story though.)

J'aime beaucoup et l'idée des enfants de Naruto remplaçant la mission de Tora est génial, lomake j'adore mais en plus je vois bien faire celà et mixer de sous la table est génial en plus j'adore voir Naruto embarrassé mais en plus cela aurait pu être un harem av c au moins Hinata shion et kiyobi.

J'aime bien pour moi ceci est canon car il est inconcevable que Naruto pendant 3 et au faite il revient a 15 non a 18, n'est rien appris sur la vie telle que le sexe, car je pense et j'en suis sûr que Naruto n'a rien appris ou plutôt qu'on lui a bloqué son éducation et passe 3 ans avec un mentor et qui ne lui ai rien appris cela me sidéré et j'aime bien que jiayara mette en scène des personnages de Naruto mais que personne s'en apercevoir.

the guys fifteen when he comes back to the village

I feel bad for Hinata, wrote a cute, fluffy NaruHina one-shot myself, but this here is Naruto x Fu so it can't be helped. And you did let her down in a somewhat humane way. Nice read.
Though I feel that you made both Naruto and Fu too overpowered too quickly; eg. Sage Mode way too early, mastering their Bijuu and Bijuu powers too easily and quickly.

Imma use ur jutsu

Make an "Icha-icha Paradise"/chapter of Naruto and Temari (NarutoxTemari)

This is one of those stories that I come back and read every few months because it's so enjoyable. Thank You!