Reviews for A Second Chance
slytherclaw7 chapter 6 . 7/6/2017
This was a FANTASTIC story, super beautiful and sweet. Thank you for sharing your writing with us all
Broweyesandhair chapter 6 . 1/24/2017
I'm glad he realizes that he has to want it for himself. And it's good that rose is setting boundaries for his recovery. Great story!
Broweyesandhair chapter 5 . 1/24/2017
I'm glad scorpius didn't lie to rose and tell her that he was fine. Great chapter!
Broweyesandhair chapter 4 . 1/24/2017
Oh ok I wasn't expecting that so soon. But I doubt that rose won't be receptive to it. Great chapter!
Broweyesandhair chapter 3 . 1/24/2017
Ok but that doesn't necessarily help deal with some of the reasons scorpius ended up there. They may not all be fixable but they do need to be addresssed. Great chapter!
Broweyesandhair chapter 2 . 1/24/2017
Rose isn't wrong but this isn't an easy place for either of them to be in. Great chapter!
Broweyesandhair chapter 1 . 1/24/2017
Wow, that was pretty heavy emotionally. Great chapter!
Wildfly chapter 1 . 7/10/2016
It's brilliant.
RupertsPheonix chapter 6 . 4/20/2016
This is really very good. I love that you were able to capture the despair of both of their injuries without getting too graphic. (Most of the time graphic doesn't bother me, but with cutting/suicide, it's a trigger for me personally.) I think you did a great job of giving their emotions authenticity without being unnecessarily graphic or crass. Really fine line, and you walk it well. You have a great way with words - you seem to choose language really well and it flows naturally. The only critique is that you slip between third and second person in the last chapter some. Great story!
Guest chapter 6 . 12/4/2015
I loved this! It made me cry when Scorpius and Draco were talking and other times as well. I really enjoyed reading this
ebdarcy.qt4good chapter 6 . 11/6/2015
Great writing. Very unique and interesting storyline!
inreverie89 chapter 6 . 10/27/2015
I cried reading this. Absolutely a beautiful, perfect ending. Merlin bless Scorpius and Rose. Hehe. Thanks for writing.
inreverie89 chapter 5 . 10/27/2015
Another beautiful chapter. I love how HP and James talked to him so naturally. Also you make Ron still a good protective father, but reasonable, too, by thanking Scorpius. Many writers make the W-P clan look bad in order to shine up Scorpius, but everything here is just in perfect amount. Thanks for writing.
inreverie89 chapter 4 . 10/27/2015
Your story is so so beautiful. It made my night. There is so much mutualism between these two.
inreverie89 chapter 1 . 10/26/2015
This was written beautifully. I totally love your version of Scorpius and Rose.
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