Very impressive. And sad. But, still, I think she's doing a mess out of a almost-nothing thing. As she said, Rory waited far longer and didn't allow himself to get into this state. And the universe was ending too! Really, Amy is too spoiled. But, still, lovely story.

No harsh judgement here: this is an excellent story. I think you really captured Amy's loneliness, her struggle with hope, her absolute faith in Rory. I thought it was really telling of their relationship that she was angry with the Doctor and not Rory in the episode, and I think you bridged that gap beautifully.

Well done. :)

That story was just as heartbreaking as the episode. Beautiful, but so sad.