oooh

Light has a daughter?!

I MUST KNOW MORE ABOUT HER NOW!

This is incredible. Mikami is given more layers than he usually is in the fandom, seeing as how he's portrayed as a kind-of mindless fanatic. You touched on that, yet really made him seem like a real person. Wonderful, props for you :)

Whoa, this was really good. I mean really good. I read it listening to the Deus Ex: Human Revolution soundtrack which really added to the tone of the story. I feel bad for Mikami.

Man, this is so... deep and depressing and I don't know what else. I really liked it. Amazing work.

Shiz it, Light's crazy. Mikami's crazy. Misa's deluded. THE KID IS FREAKY!

D: I loved this one shot- is was written beautifully. I always felt sorry for Mikami- he was just used. He was a good person, until Light came along..

Everything is perfect- except the small detail that Mikami can't see his own lifespan.

Going on my favorites.

I'm glad to see you writing a Mikami fic, and I must say, it's probably one of the better ones I've seen... I like the way it was written, something about the way it flowed really drew me in... There were a few minor grammar errors, nothing too horrendous, or anything like that... All in all, very nice. :)