| Reviews for A Whisper Away |
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  EmoWolfQueen17 chapter 3 . 8/26/2015 Holy hell that is spicy! Please please please finish this story! I love love love it! |
 TheHellAngel chapter 3 . 12/8/2013 OMG love it! |
| Izora Calla Rahl chapter 3 . 12/3/2013 WRITE MORE!11 |
| X.summergrey.X chapter 3 . 7/8/2013 dang, hurry up with the next part please. |
| shortcake101 chapter 3 . 6/30/2013 Okay I'm reviewing again so update immediately! Omg love it love it, but just some constructive criticism... It, to me, sounds strange when Derek says "I need you" all the time, it just doesn't feel like a Derek thing to say , it makes him sound like a push over and a bit stubborn and kinda less clumsy as Derek would be in these situations ... But then I don't know Maybe I'm over thinking it...however chloe sounds and thinks just as I thought she would in this situation, so cute and innocent, but with a dash of fire and forwardness :) very cute hehe love lots xxx |
| shortcake101 chapter 2 . 6/30/2013 Oohhh its so exciting! Hehe and very cute aahhh love your writing so so adorable but touching hehe xx |
| reading is sexy 101 chapter 3 . 5/20/2013 OMG! Update! Finish it pleeeeaaaasssse!? |
| BloodPrincess96 chapter 3 . 5/9/2013 OMG! I love it! When is the next chapter going to be posted! I can't wait! |
| Ailith-Kansas chapter 3 . 4/5/2013 Please update, you cant leave it here! |
| Lerial.R.Shadewing chapter 3 . 9/2/2012 awwwwwww, so cute! i like the way you kept them in character, great work! |
| cband chapter 3 . 8/17/2012 Plz Update ! you cant leave it like this |
| Chlerek chapter 3 . 8/9/2012 Keeeeeeep it going! At least finish it! |
| None Spoken chapter 3 . 7/20/2012 YOU STUPID (insert horrible name here). YOU CLIFFIED! YOU WRITE AN AMAZING NEXT CHAPTER WITH A GOOD LEMON IN IT OR ELSE. BTW, good chapter. Much enjoyed. XD Sure Derek did, too. |
| None Spoken chapter 2 . 7/20/2012 ...AND THIS IS THE MOMENT WHERE THE JANITOR COMES IN AND SCREAMS AT THE TWO TEENAGERS HAVING SEX ON THE COUNTER! "GET OUT! GET OUT, you vile Filth! I swear to God, you'll do it anywhere these days!" XD |
| None Spoken chapter 1 . 7/20/2012 Oooh, good thing I didn't find this thing until the second chapter was already up. Otherwise, I'd be like, WTF, LADY? YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT THERE! What is WRONG WITH YOU? but I'm late reading it, so, HAHA. Go me! I beat you, you stupid cliff hanging author! |
