It was a great fanfic i loved it but can you please leave the link to the sequel because I can’t find it thanks!

wat. de. fook

Whats the next journey tell me AKA I Love This story Super Good

I loved it

Great story, but you could work on keeping the reader's attention I almost didn't read all the way through, you could also add a little more detail

Since that jerk "Hiashi" disowned his own daughter I feel that he should get the boot and have no
more rights to what he has gotten handed to him on a platinum platter!

Now Kankuro's very life is going to be a living nightmare all because he'll have to put up with Temari,
and if he doesn't it's out to the streets for him!

I certainly hope that everyone who reads these chapters notices that the Kyuubi demon-beast is a real
trouble maker and certainly knows exactly how to push Naruto's buttons with the intended reaction of
course!

That Kankuro guy is incerdibly STUPID and doesn't know the first thing about sex because once it's
been done you can't just go back erase the event like a stray pencil mark on a peice of paper, yrt he still want's a nine tailed demon like beast inside of him? Doesn't he know that a demon such the
Kyuubi that Naruto has can increase every single sense one has, including the sense of smell?

I think it was HILARIOUS! HAHAHAHAHAHA!

I cried when it ended... Or was that a shit?

Amazing! I love it

When will the sequel be released?

Humans don't go into heat, stupid.

Awesome loved it funny too! Keep up the good work