Lol! Just imagining that scene!

Yeah, my mum told us that she got us from the dump. You can only imagine how that feels like.

that was really funny

Thank you for writing a story about little Ron. I adore Ron and this story is a perfect snapshot of a day in his young life. It's a great way to showcase the Weasleys as a unit. I love how the boys all back up their Mom. Even though they end up making it all worse in the end.

Ahahah, that was adorable. I can certainly image this happening in canon, those curious little redhead. Great job on the cute factor, and the story plot itself was simple yet clever.

However, a few things could use improvement. For one thing, there were a lot of short paragraphs. I feel like that's okay in moderation, but a paragraph by definition is at least four sentences. Also, grammatically structurally, the quote, "Ok you can help! I have to go ask Fred and George." is technically a bit wrong. I think you'd want to write "Okay," and there ought to be a comma there to separate the phrases.

I know; grammar is weird.

On that note, I'd like to refer you to the creative writing website Rocky Mountain International (www. rmimagic .com), a text-based Harry Potter roleplay. RMI has a strong online community, and I think you'd fit in really well. I hope to see you around. :)