Fantastic! Very well-written, especially bravo for writing D'jok in a (rather) unbaised way. Most people either bash him or make him mr perfect, but you managed to picture his character with much skill. Rocket's great too, although his King persona seemed at bit 'too cool to live' compared to D'jok's colourful pov (but that's just my opinion, I really enjoy characters that have real flaws and arent 200% made of cool).

I've read all your stories and I love them all but to be honest what I enjoy most in them are how you write characters other than Rocket and Tia. Don't get me wrong, I think you're a genius at writing those two, no doubts here. But the way you picture the rest of the Snow Kids (even when they have minor parts) or especially Sinedd ("Skippng rocks" Is just purely amazing) is just so absolutely fresh and vivid. It's probably only me but when I read your Rocket it strains me that he is just too cool, even when he has flaws they are not so bad. I really love the nerdy vibe from fangirl!Tia and embrace the 'lame' in her.

(this is only my annon rant so please don' be offended, i really love your writing and that's why i bother to write a comment :))

To sum it up: Excellent story, I really enjoyed reading it! I'm looking forward to seeing more of your works ( and vote for Perfection!).

This is so brilliant. The symbolism, the descriptive language, the similes, the metaphors. The language flowed beautifully. Gosh I can't get over the gorgeous descriptions of the shadows on the floor. Just...Ugh...I loved this. Pure brilliance.

Wow! I love how you've portrayed the similarities and differences between D'Jok and Rocket, this line was great; "You need people to know and tell you. People to witness your great destiny." No need to worry about characterisation!

OMG, you watch Game of Thrones? I now see the comparison, hehehe, I'd love to see that fic!

Eeeeeee! I absolutely love this! Thank you! I don't understand where your doubts are coming from, both Rocket and D'jok feel really in character.

This especially struck me as being totally D'jok-like: "honestly, he had not cared about captaincy before someone else was given the title."

Throughout the fic the differences between the two are made very clear- D'jok's need for validation from others compared with Rocket's supreme self-confidence. The tension between them is great and the last line is very haunting!

As to what to work on next, I love everything you write so I'd be happy whatever you choose to work on next, but I think it would be nice to see another chapter of Perfection...

Wooohooo! I'm so happy to see you post new stories! Big fan of your works speaking here :D

I really enjoyed the fic (and not only because the dynamics between D'jok and Rocket get so little love in the fandom).

Rocket is indeed the KING in the fic, but it feels in character considering when the story takes place in the show.

I can imagine D'jok is hard to write, with all his flaws he's a hard character to write without making him 2-dimensional.

And as much as I love 'Us' I'm dying to see how you will handle 'Perfection' (I adore Sinedd in your other fics and your so good at writing relationship stuff- and Sinedd and Mei deserve a good story that would explain their WFT relationship) :D