xD Finally decided to check up on my email for ffn alerts and I'm glad to see this story have been completed! *pops confetti*
Reading this old fic brings back a lot of my childhood memories! Thank you for your dedication!

I have to say, this story was beautifully written with a wondrous plot, yet I feel as if the relationship with Natsume is too sudden. One second she doesn't love him, but the moment Natsume gets married she becomes in love. I still love this story, nonetheless, but there's always that one thing in all stories.

Thanks for letting me take such an awesome journey with you ** so cliche, I know, but I'm serious. I'm still going to be waiting for you here, so do know that I WILL read the sequel once you have the time to put it out. This story was like a whole new persona of Mikan, and I loved it. The time skipping (in my opinion) was done just a little too much, and it did need some more detail here and there, but there's no such thing as the perfect story. It was also a quite rushed end, and I'm sorry for the criticism, I don't think you asked for any XD. By no means do you have to follow it, or whatever. But what I did love was Mikan. In this story, she was fierce, and wasn't a clumsy girl, with an airhead personality. Now don't get me wrong, I still love that, but its nice to see a change every now and then, you know? I found that this plot was creative, it was intriguing, it was what a good story has. Why am I rambling so much? Sorry lul I really do wish you good luck with you senior year. I can imagine all the pressure/stress. I'm not one yet, so I can't really give you advice, besides yet even more cliche-d things. I'll end this here, I'm sure you're bored of my ranting ."

Seeya in a year or two, I guess

UGH! Stupid Luna should die

Update.

Omg...that's all I've been able to say after reading this. This is the first sorry I've read in which Mikan is truly greedy and dark. I've been shocked to the core by this. I am in desperate need of an update! I mean,how could she even think of painting the baby's hair to make it darker?! She's ruining the lives of all the people around her! Please update soon. I have to know what happens!

Ah yes! An update :D Love it!

Hey, I happened to pass by your story and I am pleasantly surprised. First of all, this story's plot is very unique actually; no high school cliches, it's unpredictable on what will happen next and it's straight to the point in a somewhat subtle way. There have been many stories recently where the grammar, punctuation and spelling is just too much to handle and I'm very thankful that this story has only a few mistakes and is very easy to comprehend. However there is one negative thing about this, even though being straight to the point is good and it doesn't bore reader, you might have made the plot progress too quickly which will make some of your readers confused. On the bright side, this is an amazing story with an amazing plot so far and I hope you keep on writing. Best wishes update soon!

I lobe this 's so rare to find one where the female main character actually has a proper goal and is so scheming. Cant wait for the next chapter!

Youre ending lines are way too good. youre evil! XD

Short but definately sparked my interest! Looking forward to read more

Next chapter ahhhhhhhh I can't wait soooo excited. Pleaseeeeeeee

Evil! You cant leave a reader like this! I want to know what happens! ;D

YEAAAAAH! FINALLY AN UPDATE! YIPPEEEEEE!

and natsume? this is yuri