I'll be honest I don't really like this. The euphinator incident was not an asspull; Lelouch's powers had been going random for a while and he was rather caviler with it's usage. More importantly he was making a point about how powerful his abilities were (namely that he could make someone like Euphie a mass murderer)

You also derail Lelouch. He DID care for Euphie so having him deliberately do that is kinda ruining

Wow, don't understand all the comments. Sure, it's a pretty brutal thing to make Euphie do that even intentionally, but I think it was very well done. It's fan fiction, not real life. I like it. Shows another possible truly sadistic side to Lelouch.

watching the original scene in the anime (where it was an accident) was already bad enough as it is, to the point that i still can't bring myself to even watch that episode again. what you have done with this fic ALMOST makes me cringe.

I'm afraid I'm going to have to join the people who ask if there's any point to this other than painting Lelouch as a demon. It just doesn't make any sense for his character, particularly at this stage of the series - he was quite willing to be manipulative, yes, and did terrible things, particularly as the series (above all R2) progressed, but he had lines he wouldn't cross intentionally, and mind-raping one of the two remaining (living) members of his family he actually bore affection towards into massacring hundreds if not thousands of innocents was one of those lines. If you're going to change him that drastically, you really need to give him a better reason for it than 'For The Evulz'.

For what it's worth, the quality of the writing itself is pretty good, and I might be tempted to go check out some of your other fics before too long. It's just a shame that in this instance you seem to have wasted on what is really little more than a hate fic.

Unless it was all intended as a parody of such fics, in which case I apologise and plead innocence due to Poe's Law. I might suggest that you make your parodies a little less subtle in the future, though; subtlety is generally good, but like all things it can be overdone.

I don't get this either. Was it just your intention to just vent on Lelouch or is there something that I can't see? The way you presented him is completely out of my realm of understanding.

Simple, small, brilliant.

Player Hater's Ball in here.

I'm not sure what the point of this is. Is there supposed to be some deep meaning to Lelouch being a sadist, especially when nothing of note happens? Other people have done this better.

Well it's an easy read but it's quite disturbing since the Lulu we all know would never do that to Euphie who is second in his heart to Nunnally.

WTF is this! beyond blasphemy! i do not approve of how misleading this title is, very few people will i would venture a thought.

:(

Thats what this story is...a failure. Lelouch is not evil nor would he want Euphemia to do it. He hated what she did. You have failed.