Great story, very well written.

Lol, this was awesome.

Mr. H is so zetta awesome. So is Rhyme. xDDD

This was so adorable! But made me laugh so much. XD Yet it turned so sad when Neku started crying. I felt my heart ache and it was just so well written. ;w; Nice job.

That was beautiful :') I love the character proogression in this story, nice job :D

i loves it! heehee its so adorable

ahhhh, I loved it. fluffy with just the right amount of humour, and the characterisation was spot on. well done. c:

the only thing I'd recommend is to maybe cut down on the use of italics for emphasis, as when they're overused it doesn't really have the impact it should have. other than that though, this was pretty much perfect!

- xo

mmmmm and then there was much fun on Joshua's part C:

I love this pairing, they're just so... fluffy, which, considering, is pretty ironic. www oh, my gawd Ryhm cracked me up. I love her so much! she's so mature about it. And about Neku being ticklish... one, how does Shiki know that? And two, watch it do more than just tickle. www

Haha, Neku and Joshua makes a really cute couple~! :D

"…You humans simply cease to amaze me." - the phrase you're looking for is "never cease to amaze". cease means to stop, so he's saying that humans simply don't amaze him, which I'm pretty sure is not what you're going for.

Haha, how cute~ I especially liked the end~ Nice going, Rhyme.

This is a really great and sweet story, the characters were in character. You should write for this fandom more often!

This is really cute.

I loved it. :]

awwwwwwwwwww super cute!