I've read this story a few times and I can honestly say that I love this story. It is one of my favourites and I know I'll read it again in the future. I can't believe I've never reviewed this story before! I loved reading how the relationships developed between the senshi, and quite honestly, I liked the Mamoru-Setsuna pairing. I liked that you brought Chibiusa into it - I do like her character a lot. I must say you did such a great job in writing this story. Usagi's maturity was written so well, that it was believable. I'm glad you kept the Starlights female to be honest. It just emphasised the acceptance the senshi have of them, in whatever form they're in - it's a really powerful message to send to readers and it was worthy of Sailor Moon. It was so clever to bring back Jadeite - nice spot on how Beryl dealt with him in comparison to the other Shitennou. It made a truly wonderful story. - R

This was a great story that gave me a lot of what I wanted to see and think should have happened. It's definitely going in my Favorites.

You know, I was always a fan of the idea of Naru being Sailor Earth/Sailor Gaia. Yeah, I know that Mamoru was essentially the "Sailor Senshi" of Earth, but it would have been a good way to keep her around.

Ok, I don't like how you made Naru a cheater. I never shipped her and Nephrite anyway. The age gap was too big, not to mention Naru was only 14 while Nephrite was a full-grown adult. That was just creepy. Her having a crush on him, ok, but him returning her feeling, no.

You know, this got me thinking, is Helios going to appear. It'll be funny seeing her being the protective parent to Chibiusa's love interest.

The way I always viewed the Outer Senshi, they're kind of like antibodies, protecting the body from foreigns invaders indiscriminately while the inner Senshi handle inner threats. That's why the Outer Senshi were always so much stricter against outsiders.

Minako's curse, if you can actually call it a curse (more like a prediction), was that she would always have to put her duty over her love life. Unless you were changing it for your story. I ship her and Yaten either way.

It's funny. Mamoru is the strongest out of all of them when he unleashes his full power as Endymion, and for that they always had to take him out of the picture somehow or else the final battle would be too easy. Almost makes you wonder why they made him so powerful if they were never going to have him use it.

I must admit, I like Mamoru and Setsuna as a couple a lot more than Mamoru and Usagi. They not only look better together, but seem like they would be a much better match for each other. And I really feel bad for Setsuna. It always seemed like she got the short end of the straw. First with always having to remain in solitary, then with having to watch the man she loves love someone else. She really deserved better.

To be honest, I can't really see Jadeite being this much of a threat. The original Sailor Senshi bested him at e very turn, and that was before they got several power upgrades and defeated foes far stronger than him.

Well, I was sort of right about what the marks mean.

I'm going to guess that the marks on their heads are like a symbol of marriage or something.

Now you're pairing up Mamoru and Setsuna? I swear, it's like you read my mind of what I would have liked to have happen and are putting it into writing.

Well, I said I wanted to Seiya and Usagi to have kids, so...

You know, I may just be forgetting, but it never did explain what happen to Usagi's brother or parents in the future with Crystal Tokyo.

Mamoru has a point. Usagi does act very different around Seiya. She acts like a real person. But when she's with Mamoru, it was always arm clingy, mushy lovey-dovey, kissy-kiss all the time. Being that dependent on a relationship isn't healthy; one needs individuality and involvement outside of their partner and their relationship. And hey, maybe now Pluto will have a chance with Mamoru since she's obviously in love with him.

Chibusa has a point. A utopia isn't always ideal. It can be a place where nothing new or exciting ever happens.