Great job!

I loved this! All the little parts about the original Sherlock Holmes made me smile, like how John had the books, or even how 221B came to be. Yeah, this was really really good!

This story is awesome, and i honestly believe you deserve an award for your writing

I really like the story. The plot is very original and interesting. You should really look into a beta, though. There are a lot of mistakes in each chapter. Is uderstandable, since English isn't your first language, but a beta would just perfect the story and make it better than it already is.

Enjoyed reading!

N'awww, lovely ending. Though the flash forwards are a bit scary. I look forward to the sequel!

Ooh, I love this! I'm looking forward to seeing how it turns out.

And I'm really impressed with your English. I'd love to be able to write this well in a language that isn't my own!

Little Sherlock is very cute. I love all his deductions which are perfect for his age. :)

This one was so good.

I really liked how you include some elements from the original canon, like the pipe, the hat, and the flat!

Read about your exams, good luck with it! I'm sure you'll do it great so you can be back to write the sequel.

I agree with you, for what you said in the previous chapter that you want to write abou them in their adulthoood.

And you're going to talk about John and the army, the med school... Sherlock drugs...

Ahhhhh, so the lines between the story in the past chapter was... ? Ughhh, can you answer me! i'm dying of intrigue!

It was a good story, congrats!

For Heaven's sake... what was those lines you wrote between the story... !

A kind of prelude of something? Are they gong to fight? Oh pleas, this chapter was so good. Thank for update this. I really enjoyed this story, and how they become so closer. Are they going to be romantically involved? It'd be quite awkward, since they grow up as brothers, well...

Update soon:)

This chapter was really brilliant, well done! I listened to the song and it set the scene perfectly.

'It remind them of the first experiment they shared together. Certainly, Sherlock didn't know it, but John kept that old paper with Sherlock's observations about frog's anatomy hidden in the deepest of a desk drawer.'

This bit was really lovely, so sentimental and sweet!

'Some stars shine more than others because they are special. You, my baby, are one of those stars. You'll shine more than anyone else because you're special'

Oh god I nearly cried.

"Don't be so stupid, John. You're my brother"

Aah Sherlock he can be so nice when he wants to be!

I'm glad I was able to help with the last bit! I liked how you tied in the parts of their future lives!

I think that every fanfiction should be set to music, it really makes it emotional.

Good work, virtual hug! xx

This was truly brilliant, I love how you are developing their relationship, and the underlying story is great. You've done a really fantastic job with this one! (I love both your stories, but this one is my favorite, I hope it's ok to pick a favorite!) Can't wait for more! x

Good chapter again

Hi! Just finished, your story is really good! I loved how you tied in all the little Sherlock props like the magnifying glass and the mug. I'm really impressed, especially as English isn't your first language, I could never manage to write anything near this good in another language! Well done x

me encantó, bello capi. estos 2 juntos q hermosos, t felicito real/ muy buen capi, ojalá y sigas xonto... y t refieres a clara?, ya t sigo x twitter, abrazos y feliz domingo

I already know who she is, but I'm not going to say it!

I'm so glad you updated. Apparently Mycroft reacted as we all though, I mmean, all calm, shaking hands with John.

I'm glad you already made them 'friends'. Sherlock's character is cold, but I think you did it well this time.

And his skull! OMG, when they're going to give him one!

What's next? (you can spoil me, you know? jahaha)

Me encantó compartir ideas contigo. Espero que el próximo capítulo sea mejor o igual a este.

Greeeeat chapter!

Very good chapter