Hi, I just love this story of yours! It's so poignant. I know it's from a while ago but I had to review it:) I especially love the early parts of Obi-Wan's life, like him getting taken away from his parents and having unusual force abilities as a child. I also thought the part where the jedi learn about puberty was really funny but also touching. I could see Obi reacting that way. You did a really nice job of retelling the events of the Jedi Apprentice books. They are the best!

Love it! This is a perfect snapshot of Obi-Wan's life.

May the Force be with you!

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