I've been scouring the internet for a good Rhoda/Mary fic and finally I found yours. This was perfect. I could hear both women's voices in your writing and I found myself chuckling along. I can't even begin to express how much I loved it. Please consider writing a sequel to this. And another and another :P I wish I could find more fics w/these 2 paired together. If anyone reading this review can point me to one I'd be grateful. But this story is probably always going to stay one of my favorites.

OMG! What a delightful read!

Thank you for bringing one of my first fantasy couples to life, with their characters true in an entertaining (and hot) story. Awesome!

Just found this treasure. It was like watching an episode (except for the fun parts). Very well done, I just wish it was longer.

As someone who enjoys seeing unusual takes on familiar characters, I loved this story. Even the title sounds like a modern take on those never-seen-onscreen episode designations from the original series.

Authentic characterizations are the backbone of all good fanfics (especially ones that explore offbeat plotlines), and you've certainly provided those, along with a sensitive, involving story that kept me wanting to find out more.

Thanks for writing this; it brought back good memories of Mary and the MTM stable of shows. God, I miss that little cat...

ROFL! Only Mary would describe what happened when she was on top of Rhoda as they "smashed their thingamajigs together". You really write her very well. And it's nice that they're talking and beginning to calm things down and accept it. After all, you can't keep going "Oh my God what did we do?" forever. And yes, I groaned but I knew Phyllis was about to show up. Really enjoying this.

I had thought about reviewing after I finished the story but can't wait. First because I don't have time to read any more today and second because I just am enjoying it too much (and would probably run out of room if I wait).

Love the build up, the confusion, the uncertainty, the attempts to calm things down but only have the attraction return immediately stronger than ever. The giving in and the love scene was not only extremely delicious (I can SEE Mary on top of Rhoda and both losing their minds) but there's such a wonderful job of mixing the feelings that this is incredible and irresistable but at the same time the fear, the belief "this has GOT to be wrong" but nothing able to stop either of them. And I think (from what a friend once told me about her first time) that being older and experiencing another woman for the first time is even more terrifying. And wonderful. (Although there was nothing wrong at all or calm about having it as a teen. LOL).

Oh and the author's notes are alone worth the price of admission. I hope people DO catch the title reference. I did. And your comments about people who delve into stories knowing what they contain and then bitching about it... priceless.

Well done all around.

Absolutely LOVE this! Good job!

I was so thrilled to find an MTM fic! I really enjoyed reading this story! You wrote them both spot on and really captured Rhonda's personality. I wish there were more femslash Mary/Rhoda fics out there but I can't find any!

First, I thank you for producing such a well-written story. So many stories can be good but the writing and grammar can "kill the mood."

Second, this story stayed very true to the original characters and didn't go over the top. It was real. And if the written word can make you laugh out loud and want to keep turning the pages then you've done a hell of a good job.

I wished this story would have continued but was very satisfied with the ending.

Thanks again!

Loved the ending! The two of them being all lovey dovey is so adorable. Rhoda's goofiness is charming in a rakish kinda way. A heart-warming, sappy ending that is well-deserved after all of the heartbreak. Mucho gracias, ma author favorite~

Absolutely perfect ending! I like the way it was realistic and natural, not rushed. The moment with Lou was great. I'm sad to see this end but hoping to see more of Mary/Rhoda in the future!

The dancing was very heartfelt. Happy to see that Rhoda let out some of her emotions. I love the way you write these two together.

The semi breakup was sad. I liked Mary's talk with Mr. Grant, very telling indeed. Looks like Mary's going to take some initiative.

I can't believe it's all over. D: but it was worth it. Great ending and I love how you added Lou's reaction. This will forever be one of my favorite stories and while I'm sad to see it end, I'm happy with the way you ended it. :)

Loved it! Beginning to end it was very well written. I hope to see your work in the future!