| Reviews for Long Road Home |
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That2-one3-girl4 chapter 13 . 12/9/2019 10/10 |
ObsidianDraconis chapter 15 . 6/17/2019 I kinda wish you’d shown Alice and the French vamp meeting but I’ll take it. At least she found him and just imagine, she’d been looking for him all along and just didn’t know it. As much as I dislike Edward, at least he became less selfish? Lol. |
ObsidianDraconis chapter 14 . 6/17/2019 Oh Eddie has done it now. They’ll never forgive him for this. Now it just comes down to why, why did he lie. So glad they’ve figured out their mates! |
ObsidianDraconis chapter 12 . 6/17/2019 Yes! So glad he realized it. Now she needs to realize it. I forgot to mention something in that chapter with the nomad, Char said it was like he was looking for something. Could he have been a scout sent by someone? |
ObsidianDraconis chapter 11 . 6/17/2019 That was great. No questions, no doubts, just biting her because he knew that’s what she wanted. |
ObsidianDraconis chapter 10 . 6/17/2019 I think they’d all want her to be happy and she has to realize one thing. She’d remember them forever. There would be no one on earth to forget them because she would hold them in her heart for eternity and maybe that’s the best kind of love. To be remembered. |
ObsidianDraconis chapter 9 . 6/15/2019 Ugh, foreboding words there at the end. Maybe it’s the pessimist in me but saying things like that always leads to things getting fucked up. Hopefully fate is done screwing Bella over though. Jasper’s background always made me the saddest. Yes, all their stories were sad in their own ways, but out of all of them Jasper had it the worst. I often wonder if any of the others would have been able to survive the way he did in that sort of situation, and with his empathic gift making it all so much worse. |
ObsidianDraconis chapter 8 . 6/15/2019 I’m glad to see they have chosen their side. Alice is right, he needs to face what he has done. What he was the catalyst for. He will be lucky if she ever forgives him, ever. I just hope he isn’t stupid enough to cause more problems. He should take Carlisle’s advice and think about his actions because he may not like the consequences. He’s alone now. I bet the Denali would turn him away if they heard what happened. Stupid selfish boy. Is it weird I found Jasper hot as fuck in this scene? Whew! |
ObsidianDraconis chapter 7 . 6/15/2019 I can’t believe he did that. I knew Edward was selfish, that’s canon, but to do that, to say those things, to be so self righteous as if she left him and not the other way around? No. Just no. Has he deluded himself into thinking that she left him? They better choose her this time, or she’s not likely to forgive them again. She may have left, may have wanted to not break their family, but I think secretly she hopes that they choose her this time. Right now, Edward is lucky he isn’t dead. Though, I doubt he’s fairing very well now that Bella is gone. Good for him for standing up to him. The asshole. |
ObsidianDraconis chapter 6 . 6/15/2019 A bear tried to mate Peter... bahahahahaha! That is not an image I want but it’s fucking hilarious. And well played on Bella’s part, boys need to learn not to think with the little head all the time. ;) |
ObsidianDraconis chapter 5 . 6/15/2019 I feel for Alice. It always bugged me how SM made it seem she sees pretty much everything, especially if you read the little of Midnight Sun on her website, but she clearly didn’t and there wasn’t a whole lot of reasons for why. |
ObsidianDraconis chapter 4 . 6/15/2019 I think Edward knows she wasn’t his. She may forgive the family, may agree to be with them, but I don’t think she’ll ever be able to forgive Edward and frankly, I can’t say I’d blame her. |
ObsidianDraconis chapter 3 . 6/15/2019 Oh she’s really going to have a time. Losing her husband and her baby and her ability for more. I also wonder if that was really a robbery gone bad or if there wasn’t more to it. I hope Luc wasn’t dirty but you never know, or he might have just pissed off the wrong people and they sought revenge. I hope Jasper gets her some revenge though. If anyone can it’s him. |
ObsidianDraconis chapter 2 . 6/15/2019 I can’t when Paul dies so I’m glad it was just a little blip. I can’t do certain deaths. His is one. Poor Bella, everything in her life is gone. It’s a wonder she’s able to even stand. Looks like the Cullens didn’t find her in time though. |
ObsidianDraconis chapter 1 . 6/15/2019 Well hell. Idk, if they save her but not him how will she live with that? How will she be able to forgive them? So Jasper is back to eating people? And Edward. I want to punch him. He doesn’t have the right to keep them from Bella, he doesn’t have the right to be jealous. He gave it up. Too bad, so sad. |