Really well done, the characterizations fit very well:)

I love this play and it makes me sad that it doesn't have a large following here. I think your story is really good so far and I hope you will continue it!

This is good!
More, please )

I was so excited to see that in addition to The Crucible you wrote a Wuthering Heights story. Those are two of my favorite stories ever. I'd love it if you'd continue writing this story. I think you keep the "voice" of the play very well intact here and I'd love to read some more. :)