love the way you wrote it!

This is brilliant!

This was absurdly good! I love the way you wrote Prowl, and really, the entire story is excellent!

Hahahaha this is just great

Okay this was actually a really cute ending considering it was...basically a war, that went much smoother then anyone could usually expect...fucking Prowl's tactical genius at work i suppose. Kept Prime (and all of his blundering) alive for how many different rewrites of transformers?

~Every1's Beta

this is so sweet! 3 I love the last note about no casualties! :3

This was a good story. The ending was cute!

Aww! That was beautifully written. I loved it.

I never knew that stuff about war strategies.

Then, when Prowl went and used it as his own strategy, it was so hilarious!

Great fun to read. A definite favourite.

I think I've reread this a dozen times, and it's still as amazing as it was the first time. :)

I love how you not only executed this fic but how you ending it specifically. It was a wonderful and cute way to bring the story to a close.

aawww! so sweet! also, the ending was compleatly hilarious, and I think it ended on a nice note. :D, totally awsome story, I Jazz wants to be a Decepticon for the right reason, aw! hehe, awsome story

adds author to favourites

adds story to favourtites

agrres that it should be declared a draw

:D this is quite good, I really like it, it was a long chapter too, LOL, sending in da hatchet, lets just hope he doesnt find any wrenches...

So I read this with the timidity of knowing it was a pairing I admittedly am not very fond of. However I was promised some very good Prowl characterization in this. And they were right! I am still not fond of the pairing. But I do love the characterization and the execution of the Siege was very well planned. You got into Prowl's head very well. I even like the bit of an unusual take on Mirage. Raj dropping into a commoner's slur was odd and yet it fit. And I love the ending notes.

And yes, Jazz is spot-on,too. Very awesome.

Great job!

Great story. I really like how you showed us how the battle was going and what was happening in the city. I think one of my favorite parts was

Want it blown up? Tell 'Jack to experiment on it. Want to save the surrounding countryside, or the wall behind your target? Get Hoist and Grapple to shape the explosive charge.

I also really enjoyed Jazz's comments on Campaign: Jazz.

What a wonderful story! I think I was just as surprised as Prowl when Jazz appeared in his office. Leave it to the Spec-Ops mech! The end left me giggling.