And this one is ALSO BEAUTIFUL!
YOU HAVE A WONDERFUL WRITING STYLE! I LOVE IT!
I would like to see more Fenders stories coming from you soon. We need more Fenders anyway.
But this made me cry big time. So thanks for that.
Wonderful story, wonderful writing skills.
Shrimpy

A grand story, it was so sweet and very touching! It made we want to cry at the end.

So very good. Cried for most of the story. Well done.

It was so sweet and adorable...And when fenris was dying, i thought hawk would make it in time to save him. seriously. i thought through the whole thing the hawk would come and save the day...And when fenris...died...i...Excuse me.*Goes to cry in a corner* Anyway, it's a wonderful piece. It reminded me that not all ending's are happy. And i think you really captured Anders love for fenris. Thanks. (Here's a smily face to cheer everyone up :) )

I started crying at the beginning through and I haven't stopped that was amazing.

This was quite tragic and profound. Poor Fenris and poor Anders. I think the game would make more sense this way if Anders had a legitimate reason for blowing up the Chantry (well, besides the mage rebellion and all that). Here, he had nothing left.

:(

Good work, though.

M

Really great story...very sad but great. But what every you do don't listen to the song Tell Me I was Dreaming by Travis Tritt...I did that and I started crying like a baby. But anyway great story.

I'm crying how could you kill Fen! *cries like a baby* why!

Very nicely done. Of course I hate the fact that Fenris died, you handled it beautifully. The epilogue is a nice touch; Fenris was obviously more important to the group than even he knew. Thanks for posting this.

Wow, I like it. I mean, you went there and even though my favorite elf is gone, I like it. Very well written. I like this softer Fenris. A great pleasure. Can't wait to read chapter 2.

That was sad:(

Oh gods this is heartbreaking, well done I shall go and cry now.

Very sad :(

My heart D:

Absolutely heartbreaking. Very nicely done.