I always knew the hobbits were stoners. It fits their character traits too well for them not to be. Bet Farmer Maggot grows some righteous bud.

Great story so far, but the formatting changed rather dramatically and it came across as odd to me. Other than that it's great!

It’s been a while since you wrote anymore chapters but the ones you did are excellent.

The personality of the characters is captured quite well. Does grape juice taste good with Jack Daniels?

Dying of laughter at Sam's antics. That was hysterical!

Well, Tolkien was originally going to write the books in elvish, but his colleagues convinced him not to. So far so good. Liking it more and more.

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yeah typical nothing changes. the battle in moria, 3 p-90s firing at 1 door can hold almost anything off, that like 1200 rounds a minute. tealcs staff i would imagne it can easily take down a troll aswell as that squid, but noo he uses it to block and breakes their most powerfull weapon. then they have the brilliant idea to use a claymore in a close space, if you know anything about explosives you would know that everyone in that tomb would be death now. but the survive only to leave their supplies behind. and ofc frodo get still stabbed gandalf stills 'dies' and before long sg-1 are just 4 humans with no guns and little to no exp using swords

This is a great story! A get mistakes in the spelling of Tolkien canon, but who really cares? I've been hard pressed to find crossovers that are good AND complete. Thanks for writing this!

What an amazing story! Very well written and immensely entertaining. :)

Cool! This seems to be a great start :) I loved the interactions, which by the way were mondo believabo (that's believable without the l and e :D). I'm definitely reading on!

Sincerely,
Cyres

Hello! I absolutely enjoyed reading this story. Great job! I hope to read more of your writing soon.

There were, however, a few things that I think could be improved.
• Line breaks. I realise that FanFiction can be a little glitchy about them, but setimes it was a little confusing when the scene changed without something to mark it. Please put something in-between scenes to clear things up.

•What was the point of Sam's inner voice? It would be great if there was some sort of explanation for it, or some way to show that it influences the story itself somehow.

•Arwen coming to stay with Aragorn wasn't even mentioned. I thing at least a mention should be included in the story because shows a human(kinda)-elf relationship working, like Sam and Legolas.

•A slightly longer farewell scene would also be nice, as it feels as if it was a little cut short.

All in all, though, this was really amazing. I hope my review is constructive and helpful, and if you want an opinion on anything specific, you can message me if you'd like. I do have one question, though. Do you have any idea or plans as to when you will start writing the sequel? I can hardly wait for mare!

It was very good. I loved the fact that you spent lots of time in research (I could tell). And the fact you wrote with some much detail and there was a good amount of depth to your story. It was so hard to put it down! I read it in like three days.

The only thing I could say that would help with with your story would be to put the page breakers when the scene changed. But you did start doing that in the last couple of chapters, so you already fixed.

This is brilliant, I was very happy indeed to realise that this was not 13 chapters, but 37, because I'm loving it.

:-) thx 4 the story I'm loving it