Ahahahahahaha,

I am loving this re-written story :). Law here is the pre-time skip Law we know wherein we thought he was just lay back guy. Now, we constant see him distressed due to our dear Oda-sense :(.
I love the interaction between Law and Ameria and it’s quite cute how Law teased Ameria sometimes and how Ameria invades Law’s personal space.
Oda-sensei had already released some information about Law but it was quite nice that you retained your own version. I love Justice’s character too and it’s quite nice reading a sort of sibling rivalry between the Trafalgar brothers.
Thanks for the wonderful updates :D.

Ah man this chapter. It's setting up a few things that I don't think got originally introduced right away and I love it! I already know who the rear admiral is and it makes it that more powerful how he gets under Law's skin without even being there to do it personally. But, man, Ameria just doesn't get to see the good side of Law for a while. She speaks out of turn, because there wasn't really a hierarchy of command in the Stawhat and anybody can saw what they want, which is not like the rest of the pirate crews in the world. Law likes his control and the final word, so it's not something he likes to hear, even if it's right.

Cleon and Sal though. Two older men just not getting along and Law just feeding the fires to amuse himself. Haha! Sal reminds me of Cookie from Disney's Atlantis. But instead of lard, he seems obsessed with tatters. I also like Cleon. He's grumpy, but he has some leeway with Law and he uses it when he sees a bad idea on the horizon. I also like, that while he doesn't seem as thrilled with Ameria, he still feels like he needs to make sure her vision of Law isn't soured by his current attitude with her.

I need to remember how Nigel and Ameria started getting along because he's so unfriendly to her, I am shocked she even sits by him at meal time. Then again, the other guys ogle her and he doesn't. I kinda want to see more of her thoughts on if she made the right decision around this point in time because it does feel like she didn't. I would like to see her questioning internally if maybe Luffy was wrong about Law being a good guy and possibly how she feels at that moment because, while the narration is focused mostly on Ameria, we don't get to know a lot about her own thoughts and feelings at times. Her perspective, negative or positive, would be interesting to know about each person she's had contact with. Especially since she's been forcing herself to hold her tongue due to Law's threat.

Just suggestions. I still am enjoying it and am waiting to see things click into place with all of them~.

It's always fun to reread stories you've already read and find things you have forgotten or never caught. Thus far, it is interesting to remember how much Ameria and Law clashed at first. Ameria use to the freedom being a strawhat offered her and not the strict ruling of someone like Law and, in her defense, Law is not being understanding. He got what he wanted, but he also is not pleased with her attitude, perhaps too use to how his men just listen to him, and seems to be a bit more aggressive because of it. I can tell he's not like this with any of his men. Antagonistic and playfully taunting at times, perhaps, but I doubt any of these men know how to deal long term with a woman- maybe excluding Brodie and Bepo. And it's funny to remember how much Nigel and Ameria did not mix. Though she doesn't seem to mix with any of them at this point. All in all, it was enjoyable to reread this and remember a lot of forgotten things. It'll be fun to see their attitudes all slowly change again towards each other.

I am a little upset that you have decided to quit writing these stories for a while as I really enjoyed both of them, I hope that you will feel better once you return to writing them again, as I will be waiting for your comeback as long as it will take.I really love your writing and you are very talented, so I hope that you will contine. I wish the best of luck and stay (or at least try to) happy.

What do you mean “that’s all folks”?!

I immediately hit up your profile page after this chapter and I'm ashwash with emotions. I'm happy to hear you'll still be writing for yourself because you really have a true talent for it and I can only see it growing more and more impressive. At the same time, I am in misery for myself and your other readers, we will miss your prose!

Ummm, are you okay? This kinda isn't an ending. Or are you just done with writing it. If so, its understandable. But it's just sorta of a weird way to end both stories.

I am...confused...

I... wait what...

I always did figure Law to be a cat person xD

If she really wants to be stronger, after her quest she'll go back to troublesome, unpredictable Luffy...

Honestly, you could publish Law's grocery list and I would still be in awe and jumping for joy. Thanks for yet another marvellous update!

I saw you updated the story in my email today and I got really happy. I'm so glad you're continuing. Its been a while since I read it. It feels really nostalgic, to be honest. Your writing has indeed improved a lot! It would be amazing to see you publish a book someday.

Hope you're doing well. 3

I caught up! I have mixed emotions about it since I no longer have any new chapters to read.

One of the things I love the most is how real the situations and their actions are. (Or as real as you can get with something like One Piece.) You don't sugarcoat the characters or make them unrealistically good people.

I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope the writer's block will leave you soon!