Reviews for Kerrigan Loses Her Control
Guest chapter 3 . 2/8/2019
Longer story, idk,all these stories seem short
Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2016
Nice Abathur smooth
Maryannae chapter 3 . 12/8/2015
Oh my god!
This is awful!
The characters are all wrong, and the last (3rd) chapter is disgusting!
To anyone who might be thinking of reading this,
there are better ones...
( s/10202626/1/Breeding-the-Queen)
LustKnabe chapter 1 . 6/23/2015
I Came so hard
Zerock chapter 1 . 6/23/2015
Great Story!
no one chapter 3 . 12/22/2014
wow that's uh odd?
Emyaneh chapter 3 . 12/13/2014
I don't think fiction depicting graphic rape in details are allowed on this website.
You didn't even put a trigger warning.
You turned a very exciting fic into an horrific disgusting mess in one really short "chapter".
Akuma-Heika chapter 3 . 6/27/2014
with how Abathur's mind works he could not defy her like this any more than a human can breathe carbon monoxide.

Interesting concept though
Guest chapter 3 . 8/31/2013
Great. simply great;
Sc2gamer chapter 3 . 8/18/2013
I don't like the thought of the queen of blades being forced into submission she needs to tip abathurs throat out
Anom chapter 3 . 8/13/2013
More plz more
Guest chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
Very interesting...
Guest chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
You would think that Kerrigan fucked raynor back when she was human, so she probably isn't a virgin...
Gahhhhh chapter 3 . 12/25/2012
My mind will never be clean again...
Blacker Side of the Shadows chapter 3 . 12/20/2012
I saw this story a few times but never actually read it, but I'm rather glad I did now. Well done, other than some grammar and punctuation issues, it was well done.
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