please update.

Name: Mifune Chizuru
Codename: Rook
Gender: (Female)
Age: 14
Hometown: Snowpoint City, in Sinnoh
Family: Unknown. She was orphaned at a young age, and her elder sister had run away soon after. She doesn't know much about them.
Personality: She tends to be flat and monotonic in her words and expressions. Nobody knows much about her, except for the fact that she, number 1, is good with almost any long range magic... (continued in pm)

Hey are going to make a new chapter... Kind of been waiting here for a while...

when is there going to be updated chapters for this story ?

If I'm right, then the "Black Raven" is Ash, isn't it?

very good

nice story so far what about his former friends and what about the region champions are they going know about raven and hunter j ? and what they are doing ? what do you mean ash turn on a lie ? and where is his mother dead ? berayal and friends too ? and what about the 13 elits that on ash team ? and where are the firsts relationships are and with who on ashs part? and is this a dark ash ending or a good ash ending in the end ? and wheres chapters 5 and 6 and is prof. juniper going to make a hint on what black Raven is ? and what is with the 1 chapter with the story with writing on it ? well post new chapters sooon

We need more evil ash stories
Great name black raven I would of used dark Phoenix

Up date soon!

Great so far!

Damn lost my chance. :(

Has this fic been abandoned? Can I still submit an OC? I only have 5 to pick from and only one of them specializes in two different types.

Please update!

Please delete My previous review it was ment for another story

Hurry up with the next chapter already!