I'm gonna shed tears now for how sad things are. Everything was very emotional.

If you didn't say that it was going to lead to good things, I'd be shedding tears right now (can't say it's a "cry"; it's only the tears flowing, and no other sound, or significant change in breathing patterns)

Sad but liked it.

On to the next one.

Keep it up.

ZR };-

Just Loved how it was pieced together was hopping fora happier ending but that's because that's how i am ), But all in all great job.

I really liked this chapter. The tension and even the arguement! Very emotional. Good work. :)

*clears throat* This was... I need a cold shower.

I liked this chapter. It was a sweet moment between my favorite pairing. :)

Oh yeah. I'll keep reading alright! :D I have a lot to catch up!

My god... I've read that about two years ago and was too shy to review. Plus my English sucked big time right then. ;) I still like what you've written so I'll continue with the other chapters.

Bah! -dies- I'm so hooked on your stories it's like over running my life! lmao Anyways on to reading the next one!

Oh my god...I have no words to express how I feel...I'm not normally a emotional reader but that made me cry a little.

I really loved this story, along with the first story :)

What I like and appreciate is that you did not "write a sad and happy ending " because it shows that this story is truly on-going-not that it isn't! You did not force an ending to make the story "complete", which, to me, tends to be the downfall of some fanfictions. I was talking with a teacher about the college essay for the common app this year and he told me that it's sometimes better not to have a definite "happy" or "sad" ending, but rather one that shows continuity and a ceaseless journey.

Overall, GREAT job! Keep up the good work!

Fang x Lightning 3

I hope your brother is okay 3

Poor light ;-; poor fang ;-; poor both of them DX

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