I have never seen a version of Lenneth before and I think this story is really good. I hope to see the end of this story. This is my second favorite story of yours.

So far... I'm not quite convinced about Lenneth. You write that she's been a slave and a whore for centuries, even for milleniums - and now she's clearly acting in a way to anger her "new master". If she's so experienced as a whore it makes no sense that she wouldn't know this particular game where a man wants her to love him. The game where her "say what you want me to say" phares are something that a man does not want to hear. Any whore would know this - I'm not a whore and even I know this.

And not only should she know all mentioned above but also, if she has acted as a slave and whore for centuries, she should have developed an ability to read her masters. To do what they want her to do before told so. I bet any successful slave is either born with this trait or is able to learn it if she/he wants to survive. Lenneth has survived and learned so it makes no sense that she's voicing out her "duties" which are pleasing her master, of course. At this point she should be able to catch what Lezard wants and to try to say and be exactly that. Sure, she could do mistakes, that's not implausible, but not even catching on is something that I'm not convinced of.

I kind of do get why your doing this, lezard wanting spirited Lenneth instead of this obedient slave Lenneth, but I do think he could see through her even if she wasn't so obvious with her attempts to be what he wants her to be.

Hiyah! And yeah you are currently writing Spoils fast... Which is great! :)

I'm looking forward to how the healing process will go... though I'll admit this isn't my favorite chapter cause well there's no LezaLenne scenes :P

And about the previous chapter, poor poor Lezard and poor poor me too... I'm as frustrated as he is :P

i kinda confuse. did the other Valkyrie know what happen to lenneth? did the same things happen to them too? well if i am lezzard first thing i will do are free the other Valkyrie and ask their help

ugh... i really hope that lenneth can go back to where the first time lezzard saw her. proud and brave woman

write faster please

Okay, hmm, heavy stuff.

Lezard, that thing will never make a proper present...then again, maybe for Lenneth it struck a cord deep within her...maybe. Would probably explain her sudden "attack" on Lezard. XD And yes ma'am, you definitely are the Queen of Cliffhangers and for that, we thank you. It's what keeps the readers coming back for more. I'm terrible at trying to do cliffhanger...I leave people going, really, is that the end or did you just forget to write the end of the chapter? XD

Oh goodness, the Lezard POV in the bathroom scene was wonderful. I felt so bad when he mentioned he felt sad for killing off his friends...good to know he's still got a little human in him. ;)And maybe I'm just slow, but I'm wondering just who that person might be Lezard is pondering about kidnapping.

Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Well I seem to have just fallen off the face of the Earth there for awhile, sorry about that! _' Life stuff got in the way, but it's awesome that you've updated since and 4 chapters at that! I even started my VP1 re-play through recently too.

Okay, now onto the actual review. Aah, Lenneth, when will you understand? I love how Lenneth is portrayed in this story almost to the point of plain naivety rather than just confusion, which is a good thing as it's a side of Lenneth I've never gotten to see before. And I'm sure her constant questioning and advances are just pure torture on sweet little Lezard here. XD And not to mention it's adorable.

Lol, all this Lezard torture, I'm sure he must be shaking his fist at you by now, but he'll be happy in the end I'm sure. I'll think you'll do an awesome job on Lenneth's past and feelings. It can be a bit difficult for character development to occur when you only have two characters playing off one another but you can also use this to your advantage. They constantly see each other and are pretty much forced together, and you know Lezard just won't Lenneth be for more than a little while. XD

I really like your story, "Stolen", it's one of the fics I read on your website. Then, I stupidly realized you had posted it here as well. Got to make sure I leave you a pretty review for that one as well because I loved the idea. Shame you got stuck on it though...:/ The way you write Lezard & Mystina interactions is hilarious.

And now I'm off to finish the remaining chapters of Spoils! :)

Waaa this chapter is a SUPER cliffhanger! I hate you!

Not _ instead I actually love you :P

I love the way you're developing characters... and both of them are acting exactly as they should so it becomes a very effective way to delay all the sex haha. With Lezard questioning whether he is like the others from chapter 6, getting revenge , and with Lenneth's self pity...

Cant wait for the next chapter :D

cliffhanger ! oh... how i so hate you now XD

sometimes i really hate when the story end ... *cry* please write faster lotornomiko T_T

you know... every story about lezzard and lenneth you write always stir my heart... really, every time i read your story it always make me feel sad for lezzard / lenneth. not because the story, but because how you describe it with word.

i read a lot of fan fiction this 1 year. and really you are the best 3 writer in my list. to bad you only write Valkyrie proffile and (voltron?) because i really want to see you write more story.

keep up write the story lottornomiko. i will always be your fans.

It's me again! I'll try my best to comment more... since your pages are one of the first things I check every time I get a chance to visit ... I am hoping commenting will get you to write more _

I have to say among your new and on going LezaLenne stories, this is my favorite because it's a great counter to the majority of stories which go along the more typical route of Lezard forcing himself on Lenneth.

Anyway I am very much liking the story so far and your note about what'll be happening next is great. One thing I noticed though that in chap 3 or 4, there was too many mentions of how Lezard is angry at the OTHERS, just became too repetitive for me a bit but that's just a small thing. Your writing as always is amazing... Honestly, you are much more deserving to publish than some others I've read. I honestly think you are one of the reasons why I am so disappointed with some published books that claim to be erotic romances but fail miserably.

Till next time :D

Gah, how did this update slip by me? *read the entire story through again like a beast*

Seeing an update from you my dear is like Christmas coming early; it truly approved my mood a thousand fold. :)

I absolutely love how you wrote Lezard in this fic, even though I am a fan of the crazed, deranged side of him. It's a nice change of pace though, seeing him trying to resist Lenneth and the urge to do anything and everything to her. XD Most of all, I really appreciate that the relationship isn't being rushed; people don't just automatically fall in love with their kidnapper, although I find it funny that it's Lezard trying to resist her when I think it should be the other way around on some occasions. XD

And oh poor Lenneth, her background in this made me feel so bad for her. I can't wait to see how you write her opening up her heart and her feelings. I do like the comical side to her, at least to me that's how it seems with her constantly telling Lezard to just take her and be done with it. And since we are on the topic of couples and romance stuff, is there going to be any mention of Lucian? Lots of drama stuff to be had there.

You truly are the master of cliffhangers! XD I was going, "No, no, this can't be where it ends!" But alas, I think it was a fine place to stop because now I can't wait to read the next chapter and find out what happens so hopefully you'll find the right inspiration to do so. And the next chapter is in Lezard's POV? Interesting...

As always, wonderful job and good luck with things!

Wow, this is so romantic and touching!... okay, that's probably not the reaction you wanted, BUT! Anyway, i love this story, I love your writing style, please go on!

ah dam! to bad this chapter only telling us from lezzard side.

but hey, another chapter is up _ can't complain because i am to happy right now XD, please write faster lotornomiko, i can't wait to read another chapter for all of the valkyrie profile story you have 3

Sorry, I was rereading my reviews and realized they all sound so retarded, sorry for the massive typos, incomprehensible texts and mindless ramblings .. omg lol. Damn, that was embarrassing. ;;;;