| Reviews for A Lingering Feeling |
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DarkestLight234 chapter 15 . 8/14 Okay, so t huh is was amazing. I'm a sucker for some good fluff, but beyond thay... the chatacter writing. That was some of the most brilliant character writings Obe ever read. All of the characters feel 3 dimensional and unique and not just a copy-paste from the show. It was really amazing and this another for one of my favorite fanfics. Thank you for this wonderful story. |
Mkrde24 chapter 6 . 11/10/2019 Reading through this for probably the third time and this paragraph gets me every time And for once in his life, time became irrelevant to the supersonic speedster. The hands in his internal clock shifted and paused, and he began to notice things that would generally float away due to his need for speed. He saw—and could almost feel—the silver moonlight pouring around them, spilling into the dimly blue sand. He could hear each ripple of water as it cascaded onto the beach, and could feel the soothing heat radiating between his body and Artemis's. With his blanket enclosing them both, he amusingly compared them to two birds—two birds of a snarky feather, flocking strangely silent together. An absolute work of art, and that's saying a lot considering how well crafted each of these storylines, and how they fit all fit into the greater arc. Not only can I completely imagine this happening, but when I think about how their relationship grew in the show I think about the scenes in this story not whatever I had imagined. An absolute work of art my man, great job! |
Anemone chapter 15 . 10/20/2019 Thank you so much for writing and sharing! I just read the entire story in one wonderful lazy Sunday, unable and absolutely unwilling to stop. You have a great way with words, fantastic vocab and brilliant dialogues. I love how you capture their emotions, the slow transition, step by step building trust, heart-warming encounters, witty banters, bubbling feelings. Thank you very much for sharing this beautiful story with us! |
Guest chapter 15 . 8/28/2019 That was an absolutely beautiful story. Very well crafted, an absolute pleasure to read. Couldn't even take the time to review between chapters I was so enthralled. Thanks for putting out such an amazing piece of work |
I dream of Unicorns chapter 15 . 6/6/2019 Nice, but its like yeast in an oven; its that fluffy. |
cargw chapter 3 . 2/13/2019 This is the best I've ever read. You are a genius... |
habinger chapter 3 . 10/6/2018 I loved the teen Titans reference |
SuperMartian20 chapter 15 . 6/9/2018 Such a good read. Loved seeing their spitfire story develop so beautifully, and so innocently. Enjoyed the amazingly humorous moments sprinkled in, especially with Robin. Thoroughly enjoyed the cute M'Gann and Conner scenes too. |
Karma-WarHawk-B16 chapter 15 . 5/10/2018 This story is so beautiful and well written. It brought me to tears several times. I love it. |
MeganKent chapter 3 . 4/28/2018 This was a really good chapter. Loved how welcoming Dick was, and even though their names were different, his friends sound and act a lot like the Teen Titans! Cleverly done! Wally and Artemis were incredibly adorable too, of course. |
let me xiumin chapter 3 . 4/16/2018 sBJSDHF DO I SEE SOME TITANS IN THIS OHOHOHO |
green-jedi chapter 15 . 2/27/2018 This was wonderful! A really sweet love story. Thanks for writing! |
colorchanger chapter 1 . 2/4/2018 Very cute |
iceywiener chapter 15 . 1/14/2018 10/10 |
nicetwin123 chapter 15 . 11/26/2017 This was such a cute story. I loved reading it. I love fluffy stuff like this, and I enjoyed your writing style. |