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Very good English for someone who's native language isn't English! Well done. I liked the story but didn't like the end though. I hated that as soon as they're freed from the book, they both disappear for 3 months without a word! His gramps could've stayed behind or swung by earlier! And though she's pissed, once his gramps appears 2 months later, she forgives Sesshomaru and waits for him faithfully. After another month, when the flower gift comes with the dinner invite, she jumps at the chance. I hate that she's drunk and barely remembers jumping on him and mating...and that during the 3mths Sesshomaru's been with other women... I don't see him really loving her or even caring enough for her to talk to her before leaving or staying in contact...if he did, even if he had to go and take care of his matters, wouldn't he have at least stayed in touch and wooed her instead of going after other women? Sorry but despite them getting together (which I totally wanted), I felt it was a bad ending cuz I couldn't see his love for her at all (sure he cared for her but he could've saved her due to his honour not necessarily out of love) and since I couldn't see his love for her, and with the circumstances of the last few months the relationship seemed to be one that will more likely fail. I could envision them breaking up when cheats on her...

Awesome... Looooooved it!

Beautiful keep up the good work.

i like this story. its rally good.

Wonderfully cute and pleasantly written. While some editing would be sure to make this a far more enthralling story, as is, it remains a heart-warming, short work.

This story was wonderful I wish you had more on her travels however

Wow this was soo good(x keep up the good work ! :D

I LOVE IT! OMG! WOW! so ya this is the longest one-shot I very read but it was so good! It was worth reading! I like what you did with your story!

Wow I really enjoyed reading it, it was amazing , it was definitely original and interesting. Keep up the awesome work!

Really great story. I like that it could have been longer if you added the details of how she gathered all the items needed, or showed in detail how her relationship with Sesshoumaru changed over that time. The way you chose to write it was really nice though, because even though the things mentioned above were left out, the heart of the story still remained. It was very nice to read!

beautiful! though there are some grammar corrections here and there but easily overlooked.

i like it. it's the first in a loong while that i've liked from this pairing!

I ship SessKag!

this made me lol..really hard..i loved it! and if i wasnt so sleepy and running on sugar fumes...this would be a lot longer...i have already downgraded to typeing with one hand...i dont know how much longer im gonna be awake XD

I absolutely loved this book till the very end. Then you had to write Kagome as spineless (no, it is NOT ok that Sesshomaru did not contact her for months), had Sesshomaru immediately start sleeping around, and then he took advantage of a drunken woman. Any joy I had over this story was ruined by how it ended. The heroine was was stupid and naive and the hero was a manipulative ass. Way to close a story.

WAY too rushed for me to thoroughly enjoy. Great idea, good grammer, good style of writing but it needed more detail...at least double the words you have. Needed to be longer... I felt like I didn't even know your version Kagome at all. I didn't see much emotion going on in it either...I didn't even bother reading most of the lemon, it just didn't feel real to me. Great plot...just was to rushed for me to actually get into it. Pleased don't get discouraged by my review...it is just a feedback for future fanfics you may want to write because you are surprisngly talented but not detailed enough. lol _