Why are you hating on Darkrai? Darkrai aren't evil or bad, people just think they are because they cause nightmares. It would be like everybody being afraid of Giratina because it's the legendary ghost/Dragon type of the creation trio and rules the distortion world. Or hating Mewtwo because he's a clone of Mew, or marshadow, or like Zeraora in the Pokemon movie about Zeraora's curse. Or also like Zoroark from the Pokemon movie Zoroark: master or illusions.

this story needs a tewrite badly. Naruto has a family who is some of the strongest trainers out their yet is one of the most stupid characters in this story. unlike in the original where he had to basically raise himself, their is no excuse for the way he acts.

let us assume you want to match the naruto from the anime. that does not work due to naruto being raised differently. This story had potential but is ruined due to narutos character not matching up to the way he was raised. was naruto bullied? abused or looked down upon consistently? no then his charcter is shit and does not fit. you would have been better of killing off minato, kushina and everyone who would raise naruto, because that is the only way he can be this stupid.

so confusing, sorry i am out

Hi there! I'm sorry about what happened to your family. I hope you'll be able to see them again. I know what its like to have a lot of schoolwork. This story is alright with me. I would like to read your next story when it comes out. Will you let Hinata have Popplio for her starter Pokemon in the new story? See you soon.

dont restart the story please
it was not needlessly complicated,
it was fine,
it was like watching pokemon but with naruto characters.
this story must return.

A good story and should it ever return it and you will be welcomed back with open arms

I would've had Danzo use an Alakazam or another strong psychic Pokemon maybe a Mewtwo and manipulate Itachi

there was nothing wrong with this fanfic,
we liked it
though i am sorry to hear about your troubles.

I am sorry to hear things are so rough, and I hope they get better, and I look forward to the reboot, though I hope that Naruto still keeps the Riolu, I don't really see it in a lot of fanfic's, so I was overjoyed to see it get a starring roll.

I'm sorry to hear that this is the end... I couldn't tell you how happy I was to find such an amazing crossover when there are so many ones that just don't blend the worlds in such a magnificent way. I know I was kind of new to this story but it was a joy to read. I hope thing start to go better for you in your life, once again thank you for your story, and I hope things get better for you.

will generation 8 pokemon be included in this fanfic
because we have 3 months before pokemon sword and shield
debuts and i can imagine yamper being on kibas team
and wooloo on ann larkinsons team.
and maybe impidimp could be the meowth of
the sound trio, and will shino get the regional bugs
of gen 8? and will naruto get a scorbunny on
his team? along with his future ground type?
this story is awesome.

Can Naruto get a Dratini, cause that is one of my favorite Pokémon lines and I rarely if ever see it used by the protagonist in ANY Pokémon fanfic, and I think eventually having a huge powerful Pokémon like that would give a good balance to his team, as so far, none of his Pokémon can really qualify as heavy hitters, with Kata being the exception.

Hi again! It's a wonderful idea to let the girls and boys have a shopping day for the contest! See you soon!

Heyy! Still waiting for the update buuuuuuttt... I just remembered from my last last review where it is all caps, I suggested that Sakura should have herhealing abilities, like they suddenlh came out due to stress wherein all her pokemons are injured and she doesn't have anything to heal them and they are in danger. I know there is a pokemon trainer that can heal pokemon though I can't seem to remember who she is and what pokemon version though. Just an idea that could be unique and helpful. Also when is Sakura getting Elygem? I'm so excited for it! Also can Sakura atleast have a dragon type pokemon? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!

I think one of them should get a lapras because it is a solid dragon buster and a nice water type