AWESOME STORY! It's been a while since your last update, I hope you'll continue this! I really want to see what happens next! :) I just LOVE HawkexFenris!

Gosh, I spent an entire long car ride today just devouring this story. You capture the characters so perfectly and I felt completely sucked into this universe you have created after the events in Kirkwall. I'd usually not be a fan of having to wait so long for interactions between characters (or, Hawke and the rest of the gang), but the story you've woven and the way you've written eveyrone is so utterly engaging that I didn't mind at all. And, of course, it made the reunion all the more satisfying. I'd love to see this updated someday - it really is such an incredible piece of writing.

I realize that it's likely that this story will never be finished, especially after a two year hiatus, but I just wanted to say that it's one of my favorite Fenris/Hawke stories on . Thanks for posting as much as you did. I hope that your knees are doing well :).

PLEASE are you still continuing this? You can't just leave it hanging like this cause it's just too good to stop omg please continue! I need to see more Hawke Fenris Owen scenes hahahahaha

I truly hope this marvelous tale does not languish overly long.

This is probably one of the best story on ff: plot is fascinating and it is very well written. I just wish that Hawke would be more trusting/open to Fenris. And I think that both Fenris and Owen will be happy to have each other, especially since Fenris wanted to have a family for so long. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Well, I'm crying now. So sad and beautiful and UGH. I need more of this story.

Oh my goodness... I think I am in love.

And hot and bothered.

Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. Thank you for your beautiful writing.

Just finished this chapter... Wow... just wow! This is by far one of the best fanfics I've read so far. It is a complete story itself without repeating anything from the game. And it is just great! The description of the characters is perfect. The way they act and speak is great written. The story itself is smart, funny, tragic, sad, fascinating and... wow... You find me quiet speechless here. I just love it. Every single word of it. It is perfect. It is a masterpiece, no doubt.

And now... I can't wait to read more!

This chapter was shaking... it was not always easy to read, I have to admit. But you showed the cruelty of it in a very brilliant way. I didn't feel like it was too much of description or not enough. It was a perfect middle. And it was as always beatyfully written.

OMG I can't say how much I enjoyed reading this chapter - and I also laughed a lot. Drunken Fenris... hilarious. And a absolutely sweet Isabela... It is something different to read here about Isabela as she seems to be the truest friend to Hawke - at the moment. I don't know what happens in future chapters, but that's for now.
I always imagined Isabela has a heart of gold and here she definetly has. For once it is not Varric - and I'm happy to read something different which is so great written!

What can I say... I love your Hawke :D She is strong, she is mighty, she is brave and she is determined. Just how you imagine a real Champion - I often read stories where Hawke seemed more like a girly who needed help with everything... But here we do have a Champion!

I appreciate that you show Fenris as well as Hawke as grown people and not some sort of love-sick teenagers (what really happens often...) It is wonderful to read both sides without that annyoing immature thinking or acting.

I read until chapter 7 by now - and now I'm taking time to write the reviews...

It is refreshing reading your great characterisation of both Hawke and Fenris as actually grown-ups :) It is rare enough... so that's why I'm totally happy :D

I loved all of the chapter of course :P but the part, when Fenris is searching the house for Hawke... his thinking and his realising was beautyful. Thank you very much!

So what can I say... wow... just wow... It is brilliantly written! It is fascinating - and I just can't stop reading!

It is so absolutely worth reading it - I thing I'll read it again... :D

I like your writting style a lot! You get into the story so easily - it is amazing. And I really loved the fact that for one time, Fenris was the one who couldn't resist :D Thank you very much for sharing this!

I'll try to review any chapter... but I can't promise, because I may not be able to stop reading one more time...

You are a desire demon, and I hate you for it. I became obsessed with one of the best-written fan fic's that I've ever read, and lo and behold, the last update was over two months ago... I want more. So much more.