What a start! This is the beginning of something fantastic. Did you ever write more for this one? It is great.

This was great! Loved this story! I know most GG fans think of Mitchum as some vilain, and when I first watched it as a teenager I thought so too. But now I can see he's not the devil. He was always an *ss but what he did pushed Rory to be better. I like this from his point of view, it's rarely done but it's refreshing! Nice writing!

Does Mitchum actually have a heart?

I really didn't know what to expect from this. Mitchum was one of my least favorite character in a "love to hate him" sort of way. But I loved this. Great great job.

I know it's been years but you should finish this

Really nice! enjoyed reading this. bye

This was really good. I had always hoped Mitchum would do something to really make up for what that family did...this was a great start. Read ya Later ;)

Wow. This is quite the start of something important!

Best writer of Rory and Logan I've ever read. Loved this!

This is an awesome prequel! I hope you get to develop it further!

Loving this story. Keep it going please

This way really good! Not at all what I expected, nor was I to keen on reading after Mitchum bumped into Rory, but this... this was fantastic. Well written, original, and an overall 'I can't stop reading this is so good' factor.

Interesting

sequel?

Wow!