amazing, and loved it...wish there was more, at this point I have either read or downloaded all of your stories...sigh

Great job!

I loved this. Though not Paul’s background of course. No one could love seeing that being done to a child, see something like that turning him into the man he was. That part was heartbreaking.

I really enjoyed this one shot. I got all teary eyed when Paul talked about his past. Great writing!

Good one shot

awwww
so cute

Not bad, a little too angsty, I'm not a fan of pity party but it was definitely worth reading. I only really have problem with the story- you see, I'm currently stuck home, trying to cure flu, it's 6 deg Fahrenheit outside, snowing like crazy and all I can think of is - there's no heating in his house?! (O.O)'

Loved it wish there was more to read

Amazing!

total 'awww' ending

Awesome!

I didnt think I could imagine Bella with anyone else apart from Jacob, but this is really something. She goes with Paul as well. Maybe you should do one with her getting laid by the whole

this broke my heart into tiny tiny pieces, poor paul i can't never what a life like that would be this is sad. But i am happy that at least he found his happiness :)

Love the story wish it hadn't ended

Bella is complete with Paul and he is with her. I really, really enjoyed this story.