Man... This chapter... I cried. ;; And, as weird as it may sound, my favorite part was Zim shattering the TV. I was like... "overprotective Zim is overprotective! :,)"

nice title. i like how u write this fic. hope you keep writing more

woah... just whoa

this was such an amazing fic!

thank you

This was amazing. I couldn't stop reading until it was over

But...but what about GIR?! Did Zim, in all those years, ever repair GIR? I'm not kidding when I say that, to me, is the most important thing I need to know. Did I miss a part mentioning if he was fixed? Could be since I spent four hours reading this and it's now four in the morning. I'm gonna headcanon that GIR was eventually restored and basically fills the role of Zim and Gaz's kid. Now if you'll excuse me, I need to stare at my various GIR things and tell myself the little robot will never die.

Look, I really enjoy this fanfic. I think is greatly paced and surprisingly in-character, but I feel the need to point something out. At first I ignored, I thought it was just a typo. But you confused 'than' and 'then' so many times in so many chapters that I'm worried that you just don't know which is which by now.

Great Job. Plus did you hear what I did. Invander Zim coming back next year . Then I read something simmler to TTG and wanted to puck.

Me: Hello
So: She gave me the power pf the caps again
Ty: Hey
May: Hey
So: Guys what-cha up 2
May/Ty: Nothing. Just reading a great fanfic with so many twist and turns

so: she took the cap away from me
Me: You were gonna eat it. Whay was I supposed to do
so: Let me

So: We seen the traler
Me: AMAZING
So: Indeed
Ty-Lee(Another OC and my muse of stupid) Why am I here
Me: Cause babe. I said no
Ty-Lee: Can I go back to bed
So: Hey
Ty: Hey baby
Note
This one is based on a family member who calls everyone babe and baby. Don't ask why I don't know

So:...
Me: Well. I am off to hunt him down. Can you call my muses up. I think they could help out
So:...(He is in shock)*puke everywhere*

So: I'm part angel. I keep this human safe
Me: Part cat, human angel.
So: No. Three sperat things dear
ME: I ATE THE OTHER CAPS BUTTONS

Me: I finally coughd up the cap button
So: Dude. I took you to the hospatel to get it cut out
Me: You took a plushie me. I will never go see doctors k