I like how your wrote Percy’s thoughts and his and Ron’s conversation. Love the injection of humor at the end.

This was a beautiful story about Percy's guilt and Ron's maturity. I love stories about the Weasley family and this was a great one. It's the first one I've read of yours, since I found this one on another authors favorites, but I will be reading more of them. I too adore Ron and Hermione and can't wait to read more of your stories. This one will be added to my favorites.

I liked that one very much.

OH my goodness I'm sorry for all the spam but I absolutely love how you portray Ron and all the other Weasleys :D

Lovely and dark.
My only criticism pertains to paragraph 13. It's not 'per say,' it's 'per se.'

Aww I really like the grown up Ron. Great interaction between him and Percy. Nice touch of humor at the end.

This is beautiful. I love all the stories you've written, well, the ones I've read so far. And I love your Ron. He is exactly the Ron that lives in my head.

Aww this was really sweet! I liked seeing Percy's point of view on everything. :) Good job!

Hilarious one-shot! :D

I like what you've done with Percy's point of view. I can understand why he was thinking what he was thinking, but I'm glad Ron got through to him in the end.

Oh, bless Percy. And bless Ron, in fact. And bless you, for writing it :L

Cait x

i love it, great story.

As I began reading this I thought. "I don't know what she can write that would make me feel content with this story." The hopelessness of Percy's particular situation made my insides squirm a little, because I really didn't see how (since the battle is over) Percy could redeem himself. I thought that he was going to feel like an outsider always and that your fic was describing how painful those emotions could be. Once I got to the end, I literally had a huge grin on my face. You make every character so... so lovable! Particularly Ron, I think (whenever I see Ron in one of your stories because I know that you will do him justice and he will be the clumsy, awkward, but thoughtful and wise young man that he grew into after the battle. Another superb piece (I loved the love bite- Percy needs some lovin', too! p.s. your re-review made me smile. :). p.p.s. I'm very curious as to what "thesecondshelf" represents? One more! Sorry! p.p.p.s. My favorites bar is now full of your stories... I hope you're happy...

Honestly, this is amazing. Simply amazing.

Love this story. Great peek into Percy's mind. Very canon and believable. I love Ron's interaction with him