Reviews for Shadows of Hatred (to be deleted soon) |
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HeavenlyOne568 chapter 21 . 2/27/2016 Please post one more chapter at least This is really good |
Guest chapter 21 . 9/13/2015 Do you think u could just make one more chapter to finish this story? Kind of a cliffhanger and I like this story a lot |
Anon chapter 20 . 2/14/2014 Yay for getting rid of the Shadows! Yay for Robin realizing what he had to do! Boo for Maria having to sacrifice her life to save everyone and the valley. I knew it was going to happen, but it's still hard to read about. Great chapter- very well-written. I eagerly await the next installment! Keep up the great work. |
Anon chapter 19 . 9/23/2013 Wow! Wonderful chapter! I cannot wait to hear what happens next with the Shadows! Great job, and keep up the good work! |
Anon chapter 18 . 6/30/2013 I have read quite a few of these Moonacre Valley fanfics. I now have two favorite fanfics for Moonacre Valley! None of the other fanfics are near as good as this one. What a wonderful read! I have been truly captivated by your story, and I cannot wait to read more! Wonderful writing. I would suggest one thing, though- edit your work a bit more carefully, or have a friend edit it for you. One time (in a previous chapter) you wrote the name Leanna, or something like that, when I believe you meant Adela. Also, a few typos here and there, but overall very good. I can't wait for the next post! |
ANNEROOS chapter 18 . 6/23/2013 Arghhh, I can't wait to read more! This is such a wonderful story! Really love it how you just made some things up. It makes the story interesting :) Love it, please update soon? X |
mysterymaiden14 chapter 17 . 5/27/2013 Wow! This story is sooo good! Please update soon! I have read a lot of Little White Horse fanfics and this is by far the very best! Please, please, please update soon! You are an amazing writer! Also, I'm working on a fan fic of my own and I was wondering if you had any tips for a beginner?! Ag |
Kyra chapter 17 . 5/6/2013 Update soon! This is a great story and your writing is so good. I like how it's different but also follows the story line. Come on I want to know what happens. Keep writing!3 |
90 chapter 15 . 4/27/2013 I EXPECTED BETTER! AND ADELA... |
xXFallen-Angel-Of-HyruleXx chapter 16 . 4/4/2013 This tory is great! I couldnt wait for a update i was so happy when you brought one out but...im pretty sure you have updated to the wrong story! :( please fix it up :) |
Guest chapter 15 . 3/22/2013 Now what? |
Adela chapter 14 . 1/15/2013 This is cool! I have the same name! Please write more, I'm begging you! I love this so much! please do this asap! I can't wait to find out what happens! |
Catstream chapter 13 . 8/14/2012 Duh Duh Duh awesome story by the way |
Guest chapter 13 . 6/30/2012 more more more plz plz plzzzzzzz i want to read more this was fantastic |
WritingWithRiptide chapter 12 . 6/20/2012 Update! I'll love u forever if u do! |